Open Poetry #7 |
~Purple Shadows~ (Dedicated to Dusk Treader) |
Alwye
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Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Purple shadows trace the sky And fall like scattered lace Lucid dreams of golden hue Light your gentle face. Moonlight sprays among the trees And lines the jeweled night Liquid wings possess the dark While fantasy takes flight. Azure eyes touch the breeze The sparkle wafting to my soul Among the scent of roses fair The song of hearts does flow. Ashen thoughts are swept away By this moment's tender kiss Enchantment is the feeling now That sends this wondrous bliss. Purple shadows drape the dawn Which rises deep within me And in the circle of your arms Together we can simply be. I cannot believe the way you make me feel, Abrahm. Overflowing with happiness, I am, my dear. *Krista Knutson* "Thought is real, physical is the illusion..." Albert from ~What Dreams May Come~ |
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Dusk Treader
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since 1999-06-18
Posts 1187St. Paul, MN |
*blushing fiercly* Dedicated to me? Umm... Well I don't know what to say... I'm more than honored that you dedicated one of your exceptionally beautiful poems to me, my dear. Abrahm Simons "In a moment lies eternity And in a kiss resides forever" - Krista Knutson my bestest friend! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
*sigh* on my best day I cant "waft" anything more or less azure laced breezes... I just gotta get me some purple contacts this is breathtaking K, truly and so is seeing you glow with a lavender blush of contentedness... very sweet indeed... waft on my girl waft on *smile* jm I think I could need - this in my life I think I'm just scared - that I know too much I can't relate and that's a problem I'm feeling ... If you're gone - maybe it's time to go home There's an awful lot of breathing room But I can hardly move If you're gone - baby you need to come home cuz there's a little bit of something me... In everything in you. ~MB20~ "What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly" ~Lao Tze Tao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
Gentle, tender, giving, and loving....this was great I enjoyed it It takes only a minute to get a crush on someone, an hour to like someone, a day to love someone, but it takes a lifetime to forget someone. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
This just flows so beautifully and your expression wonderful, just a perfect read Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Krista~ Again and again you are turning out pure gems. This is simply lovely. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Deeply tender and soothing to read. Well done! |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
This is beautiful, and happiness-filled. Thank you for this lovely poem this morning. |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Dusk- Made ya blush, did I? I'm glad you enjoyed it, sweetie. JM- Purple contacts, eh? LOL. And I don't agree with you....you can make stuff waft, I've read it. Thanks so much for your lovely comments, I appreciate it as always. First_Knight- Thank you so much! tracie- Thank you also. Marge- *blushing* A gem? Why, thank you very much. ethome- thank you! Martie- Well, you're welcome! And thank you for reading it! *Krista Knutson* "Thought is real, physical is the illusion..." Albert from ~What Dreams May Come~ |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
~krista this was sensational. i loved every- thing about it from the title to the theme to the words! excellent poem! really enjoyed. amy "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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