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Of Love and Roles
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Of Love and Roles |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa 
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I can't imagine life without you So long I've been under your spell So many moments that we've been through So many ways I know you well And still I know you as a friend I watched you in his love embrace I cried with you at bitter end I wiped the teardrops off your face I've warred within my heart just thinking Whether or not, your lips, I'd kiss I‘ve felt my heart within me sinking As I recalled, the chances missed I fear that years of friendship lasting Forbid us from becoming more But when your loving heart comes casting I know the role to audition for |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
What a wonderful Poem Kevin. I enjoyed this read a lot. Thanks ~netswan |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
Boy have I been in this position before. You expressed it perfectly! To risk a friendship for the chance of love...or miss out on the chance of love and settle for mere friendship? Tough decision. Great work! "That man has shown himself great who has never grieved in evil days and never bewailed his destiny." --Seneca |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This just flowed so beautifully Kevin! Wonderful sentiments ... I loved your ending ... well done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
Thank you ns, very good to hear from you Ta, isnt it ever, I hope things worked out for you KM, I like the ending too, it really expresses my hope, thank you for reading |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
I feel selfish, but I want this poem to be read, even if not replied to so Bump hehe |
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~ViXeN~ Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 93Guelph, Ont. Canada |
Hey Kev, heheh I must giggle at the last entry *I feel selfish, but I want this poem to be read*.... hehheheheheh LOL As always, your writing amazes me. *whether Im with it or not* hehehe This is a good one, Kev, I was thinking about using it in my anthology, if that is okay with you *PLEEEEAAASSEEE* hehe Shan |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Kevin, One thing I have learned in life... take it while you can. You never know when you're going to get another chance. Follow your heart!  Well expressed! ~Sheri |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Kevin, another great one. Your style has an unusual read to me that always seems fresh. Bring back that one about going into the black or something, it was the first one I read it was way cool. parker |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Another great poem from you Kevin, Enjoyed this one too.  Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain." I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow (unkown) |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Kevin~ excellent, as always! i really enjoy reading your work! i know all too well the position you are in...but i finally let my friend know how i felt. and things are suprisingly turning out fairly well. i wish the same for you my friend, truly do. take care. great poem! amy "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Hello Cutie Pie~ I LOVE THIS ! 'But when your loving heart comes casting I know the role to audition for' GREAT line ! Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Aww Kevin,...this is so great. Love it. Truly do. Thank you for sharing it.....sharing a little bit of your heart. Very nice. Well written. Take care. *Peace. |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
Where do I start? when i finished writing this thing, and reading it over for the 100th time, i was so happy with it, i think thats the first time thats ever happened, everything i wanted to say found its way out of me and onto the paper Im so happy that you guys could identify with it and take it in as your own, thankyou for such kind replies, they really help right now, a million thank you's and a smiley face |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Hi Kevin Beautiful poem! And beautiful poems! I was reading some of your other poems And I really liked……In love with one who loves another ……Stage Right ……My turn And my favorites ……Self Adressed And …...*What is life but little things See ya at the top! |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
Thanks insect, especially for taking the time to look up my older stuff, i used to post alot more, i would like to get back to that as soon as school ends, good to hear from you |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Kevin this is my favorite of any of yours I have read. She's lucky to have a devoted friend like you that cares for her...and who knows maybe someday you will share much more. James |
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