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insect
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0 posted 2000-06-06 08:51 PM


Kit-Kat

A feline in a package          
The wrapper is the cage
The danger of release
Is the taste of a piece
Hidden in a silver lining
A ferocious taste of sighing
When opened with care
To a mouth watering stare                                                                
Attacking your taste buds
Overflowing with pleasure floods
Such delightful attraction
A mauling of satisfaction
Have a break of perfection
With a selfish consumption
It's the king of sweets
The beast of treats        
Armed with claws of four
A scratching craving for more
So back to the store
For a Kit-Kat with a roar


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SpitFire
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1 posted 2000-06-06 09:06 PM


~Ah Ha....awesomeness!!!  Love it.  Love your fresh work. Truly a tasty treat of a poem here.  Take care.  Thanks for the reply to my last...you sk8?  hehe.  *Peace.
Kit McCallum
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2 posted 2000-06-06 09:07 PM


Well now, I couldn't resist ... this is my favorite treat and part namesake!  Great poem insect, off to the store I go ...

Best wishes,
/Kit

netswan
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3 posted 2000-06-06 10:20 PM


LOL insect that is my son's favorite treat.
hahah.  Cute to write about things we
love to eat -- clever

~netswan

insect
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4 posted 2000-06-07 11:57 PM


SpitFire…I was pretty good at freestyle….my specialty
                 was doing a handstand on my board while going
                 down a hill eating a Kit-Kat…now that's awesomeness!!!
                 Well! I had to stuff the Kit-Kat in my mouth before
                 I went into a handstand otherwise I would have fell
                right on my puss!! HA!HA!

Kit McCallum…Hurry back with that Kit-Kat Kit!!

netswan…I have one Kit-Kat left?…Since Kit's gone to the store
                 I can give SpitFire a *peace…. you a piece…and your
                 offspring a piece…and that leaves me with a piece!
                 Oh!! Hi Kit!!…You're back already!! Did ya get
                 the Kit-Kat Kit?!!…..Where is it?!!…. Let's see it?!!Kit!!
                 I KNEW IT!!! YOU ATE IT!!! Before ya even got out of
                 the car …didn't ya!! Tell us the truth…spit it out!..NO!!
                 I mean…. HEY!! LOOK? There's the empty wrapper
                 hanging out of her pocket?!! Alright now were all going
                 to have to go together!! Everybody watch everybody!!!
                 Everybody on SpitFire's board…she's driving!!……
                 What a roar!!!


Thank you all four responding LOL

Parker
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5 posted 2000-06-08 05:41 PM


puts a whole new light on that chocolate bar, its a good thing I don't eat chocolate..well except some places.

Parker

insect
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6 posted 2000-06-08 11:54 PM


Haleyja…You don't eat chocolate??
                 How do you consume it…? Do you
                 absorb it through your arm pit or
                 something!!LOL
                 There's still room on this board are ya
                 coming to the store with us?

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7 posted 2000-06-09 02:45 AM


Insect~

Hey, 'break me off a piece of that Kit-Kat bar' !

LOL !  This was a sweet poem for sure.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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insect
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8 posted 2000-06-09 10:09 PM


Marge Tindal…Yes you can have my piece
                           and I’m going to put you on
                           my shoulders on our way to the
                           store because of this picture of
                           ...………………perfection.
                           Thanks for the picture.
                           Such delightful attraction


Watch out for that rock SpitFire!!!

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