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amazon_lover
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since 2000-04-09
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0 posted 2000-06-06 10:12 AM


It's a wonderful game that we played
Atleast I enjoyed the game
Me showing the maximum of love
You returning it with a sense of doubt
I guess the game ended when you moved to face the next round opponent
You gave a beautiful ending
I guess you're too good at it
You've beaten me in straight sets
I love you lady
I just love the way you played
Your elegance is too good
Your deceptive volleys makes you a sure winner

I guess you knew it from beginning to end
But I thought our love would never end
Still I'm trying to figure out was it all just a game
But now I've become well-versed in it you see

Not that I would play a game
But atleast I would understand if its all just a game

Sincerely
A_L


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SpitFire
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since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

1 posted 2000-06-06 01:01 PM


~Aahh AL,..this is my second time reading this.  Even the title is a stinger.  Great expression here.  Such an ouchy subject....giving all you've got and not always having it served back to you.  Take care. *Peace.
amazon_lover
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2 posted 2000-06-06 01:06 PM


Hi Spitfire
I guess she always served an ace.May be I couldn't take her serve. Anyway it was a good game. Atleast she was able to take my serve. We played it well.
Sincerely
A_L

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