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~Thrush Song Haiku~
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~Thrush Song Haiku~ |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA 
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*Usually, I would consider this finished, but for some reason, I am not completely happy with it, I know, I'm such a perfectionist. If anyone has any suggestions please share them with me! Or if you feel that it is okay the way it is, let me know  Thanks!~THRUSH SONG HAIKU~ 5-7-5 The song of a thrush - bellowing her heart's desire such splendid beauty! *By Melissa Honeybee* |
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Elizabeth
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since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Well, I don't have any suggestions, but it IS beautiful, Melissa! Elizabeth And this I say to you: why? Why? Just tell me why, so I can understand. Why? |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Thank you Elizabeth, I guess that my haiku is okay afterall Take care, Melissa Honeybee |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Ok???...It is so much more than ok....it's wonderfully beautiful. Thank you for sharing it. *Peace. |
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