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hoot_owl_rn
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0 posted 2000-06-05 12:06 PM




~* Fallen Angel *~

She wears a robe
Once soiled in shame
She’s fell before
Though not the same
In wildest dreams
She’ll touch the sky
But sometimes angels
Have to fall to fly

She’s bore the storms
She’s seen the rain
She’s looked for truth
And felt the pain
Through all she can’t
Help wonder why
It seems that angels
Have to fall to fly

He looks at her
Like none before
She sees her scars
He sees much more
He whispers to her
And meets her eyes
“All God’s angels
Have to fall to fly”

And lifted up
In wings of love
She leaves her past
To rise above
She takes the leap
It’s do or die
‘Cause sometimes angels
Have to fall to fly

She soars tonight
On tarnished wings
With voice once mute
She proudly sings
No longer drowned
In tears she’s cried
It’s true all angels
Have to fall to fly


~For Rodger
Who's taught me that it is alright to fall, but even more importantly, how great it can be to fly.
I love you  
~Ruth

A special thanks too to Michael who posted a poem with the line "Sometimes angels have to fall to fly" several months ago....   I told you my dear friend that it was just too good to pass up    


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 To love means never to be afraid of the windstorms of life: should you shield the canyons from the windstorms you would never see the true beauty of their carvings. ~Elizabeth Kubler-Ross



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Corazon
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1 posted 2000-06-05 12:08 PM


oh, my gosh, I am holding back tears to type this ruth....this is so beautiful, such a promise of hope for me, such a healing note of beauty for you....*big big smiles throug the tears for you girl*
Martie
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2 posted 2000-06-05 01:47 PM


Ruth--This is so possitive in direction, so wise in living...so sweet with love.  Bravo beautiful!
Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2000-06-05 01:48 PM


Hoot~
Simply lovely, gal.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Sunshine
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4 posted 2000-06-05 02:01 PM


Ah Ruth, you were the wind I needed today, now if I could just spread my wings...

So glad to see this, and you...hugs,

 Sunshine

~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow.
Helen Keller ~~~


Elizabeth
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5 posted 2000-06-05 02:08 PM


'Tis true, and you have stated it well. Now, spread your wings!  

Elizabeth


 And this I say to you: why? Why? Just tell me why, so I can understand. Why?



REBECCA ALLYN
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since 2000-05-09
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6 posted 2000-06-05 02:16 PM


This is truly a beautiful piece of work!! Nothing but pure poetic talent!!


LOTS of LUV,
Becky

Corinne
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since 1999-10-28
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7 posted 2000-06-05 02:35 PM


Pure poetry, gal!

Corinne

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

8 posted 2000-06-05 02:56 PM


an angel's wings are fragile,
sometimes they fray and tear.
an angel too may fall,
her heart you now hold and spare.
*******


BEAUTIFUL poem Ruth...
wonderful words of how love heals a heart.
take care hoot-girl
jm

 I think I could need - this in my life
I think I'm just scared - that I know too much
I can't relate and that's a problem
I'm feeling ...
If you're gone - maybe it's time to go home
There's an awful lot of breathing room
But I can hardly move
If you're gone - baby you need to come home
cuz there's a little bit of something me...
In everything in you.
~MB20~

"What the caterpillar calls the end ...
The world calls a butterfly"
~Lao Tze Tao~
~Butterflies are meant to be free~


Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26
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Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
9 posted 2000-06-05 05:25 PM


EXCELLENT is one word that can describe this one...

so glad to see your poem, Ruth, and also to see you around...a flash of light appeared and it was you....

Spread your wings and
Soar into the sky,
Gather your voice and
Prepare to fly high.

Regards, sudhir




 Hey you, out there in the cold,
Getting lonely, getting old, can you feel me?
Hey you, standing in the aisle,
With itchy feet and fading smile, can you feel me?
Hey you, don't help them to bury the light.
Don't give in without a fight.
Hey you, out there on your own,
Sitting naked by the phone, would you touch me?
Hey you, with your ear against the wall,
Waiting for someone to call out, would you touch me?
Hey you, would you help me to carry the stone?
Open your heart, I'm coming home....

by Roger Waters (Pink Floyd) - The Wall

CocoBaci
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10 posted 2000-06-05 05:40 PM


O me O my, I can't even hold back the tears as this poem you've shared just reaches out and a box of kleenex is needed. Very lovely writing HOOT as always.
Coco

angelsamongus
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since 2000-05-27
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11 posted 2000-06-05 05:49 PM


Ruth,
Beautiful poem, I can relate so much to this.
Thank you for taking the time to share.
I hope you enjoy your fight!
~Lori
I sent you an email too..

Dark Angel
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Posts 10095

12 posted 2000-06-05 06:53 PM


Oh Ruth this is gorgeous, it is true we do need "to fall to fly". I have missed reading your poetry Ruth and I have missed chatting with you. *hugs* Dear Friend.  

 Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain."
I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow
(unkown)



Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16
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13 posted 2000-06-05 08:25 PM


Ruth,

Angels are such wonderful creatures, aren't they?  This is so romantic and beautiful.  I am so happy for you, my friend.  You deserve all the happiness in the world!!     Great writing!!

LW


 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
14 posted 2000-06-05 08:29 PM


~Ruth~

This brought tears to my eyes. It
is such a moving piece of work that
truly spoke to my heart. This is full
of such sweet encouragement. Thank you
so much for posting this. I really
needed to read something like this and
to believe in life and love again.
amy  


 "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends."

"Fate exists but it can only take you so far,
Because once you're there
It's up to you to make it happen."




EagleOne
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Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...
15 posted 2000-06-05 10:03 PM


Ruth, this is fabulous!!

 God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown



First__Knight
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since 1999-11-08
Posts 678

16 posted 2000-06-06 01:05 AM


You have always been an angel in my eyes....and I can't imagine you doing anything by flying    Miss you

 A man does not love a woman because she is beautiful...But she is beautiful because he loves her.



Dragon's Soul
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since 2000-06-04
Posts 25

17 posted 2000-06-06 01:45 AM


uh..........hmm.........
speechless
Utterly speechless
I can't find words to describe the emotions that your poem has enstilled in me
I just don't know what to say

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
18 posted 2000-06-06 10:01 AM


Thank you everyone for the wonderful response to this poem that means a great deal to me. It's wonderful to soar where once I could barely walk  

David...thank you...it's taken me some time to learn to use these wings. Miss you too my friend  

Denise
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19 posted 2000-06-06 10:31 AM


Very beautiful, Ruth!  

Denise

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