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Would you still love me? (For DA)
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Would you still love me? (For DA) |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois 
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If I could strip away All the things I do Would you still love me? If I quite doing dinner If the laundry didn't get done Would you still love me? If you came home To a house not clean Would you still love me? If you stripped away All I do and all I give Would you still love me? Would you love me For who I am to you? Would you still love me? Can't you see That in all those things I put my love? But even without them I still love you, Would you still love me? DA I don't know why this popped in mind last night, but it did. From your view point. I might be way off here. But in any case I hope it helps you some! You have many ~HUGS~ from me, I'm sorry I haven't been there lately. But I am now! You're so sweet, and I hope things brighten up for you soon! |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
WhtDove, I'm sure with people like you things can't help but look brighter. Dark Angel--here's a smile for you:  Elizabeth And this I say to you: why? Why? Just tell me why, so I can understand. Why? |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Thats a very sweet poem, everyone needs to be loved for who they are and not what they do otherwise you just end up loving lies . I like this poem very much, it re-expressed what already knew but couldn't accept . Thanks . L.of.L. Tom . o  )Insanity is a perfectly normal responce to an abnormal world -R.D.Laing.- |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Liz you're so sweet, but I'm not so sure about making things brighter around everyone. But thank you for such a sweet comment. Tom, I hope it helps others see, it's not just what we do. It's how we feel, and putting those feeling into the things we do. Sometimes we love for the wrong reasons. So take away all the other things, and really look at the person. Do we still love them for them? Or because of what they do? |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh Angel, I knew there was a reason why I called you Angel  because you are an Angel!!! This is really really beautiful and so sweet of you to have thought of me and actually pen a poem, a beautiful poem. It is a really good question isn't it, Would you still love me? Thank you Rebecca, Thanks for being around when I've been down and making my heart smile You are a friend to be treasured and I will treasure you. NOW I NEED SOME MICKEY!!! ya gonna give it to me??? Well I'll just go hop along my way home RIBBIT RIBBIT RIBBIT hiccup RIBBIT RIBBIT hiccup hehehe Luv ya *hugs* Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain." I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow (unkown) |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
WhtDove this was quite touching and beautiful. you write from the heart, and pose a very interesting question. great poem. amy "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
DA I didn't know if it would hit home or not! I've not been there as much as I should, and I'm sorry for that. I don't know if Mickey will work on here but I'll give it a try O =o) O There ya go! Now quit with that ribbit! Love ya girl! Cheer up! Aimster thank you! I hope it's something everyone can think about. |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
WhtDove; I like your thoughts on this one. I think I will run a copy with yes or no choices and give my husband a test. I don't want him to fail. Different and delightful. marcy |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
If I came home from working at the factory all day From doing work I hated just to earn a decent pay And when I walked into the house, the whole place was a mess And you were saying "Do you love me?" I would say "I guess." If all my clothes were dirty 'cause the laundry wasn't done While you were playing Bingo with the girls and having fun And the dishes overflowed the counters and the kitchen sink As you were saying "Do you love me?". I would say "I think." If I had to clear a pathway through the den with a machete And the living room took on a semblance of the Serenghetti And you said you wanted me to love you just for who you are You can rest assured that I will always love you - from afar!  Now, ladies, don't attack me! I'm just having some fun with dovey and interjecting a man's point of view here. Put those daggers down! It's a joke!!!! Oh, jeez.....  |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Balladeer~well since you made me laugh, I'll overlook it this time but I'm not so sure about any other time. LOL very cute! Elizabeth And this I say to you: why? Why? Just tell me why, so I can understand. Why? |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Uh oh Marcy! Let's hope he don't come up with some like Balladeer did here  Good luck! Michael, I've thought on this some, and I still don't know what to say... I guess it all comes down to what happens in the Dead Sea right? You're funny, and you really made me laugh! You nut...quit messing with me! LOL These women are gonna kick yur butt I'm sure they'll have all the pleasure in the world when they do it too Right LJA? |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Earth to Apollo.. The test has been scrubbed, 'cause the kitchen is not. marcy |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
YAY!!! I GOT MICKEY!! woohoooo, thanks Angel *hugs*Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain." I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow (unkown) |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
LOL Marcy! So did he pass? DA, Hey Mickey your so fine, your so fine ya blow my mind, HEY MICKEY! |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Believe me when I say I shudder to ask this but.....what's a Mickey????? |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
Hi WhtDove Thats a wonderful msg that you've brought out. People can sacrifice something for their love but to sacrifice love is nothing but death. Sincerely A_L |
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sea_of_okc Senior Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 568Oklahoma City, OK, USA |
ROTFLMAO Balladeer I see you just can't stay out of trouble still! And I don't know about yours but mine isn't named Mickey... |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very touching poem, Rebecca! I can see that it hit the spot with DA! Hillarious Poem, Balladeer! ROFL Mickey is Mickey Mouse....a funny face that Rebecca does on ICQ Denise |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
This poem has lots of feeling and sincere heartfelt words and sentiments, WhiteDove. We all need to be loved unconditionally, y'know? -------- Michael... what's got into you? LOL machete/spaghetti??? geesh!! ROFL... too too funny... hehe hehe... i can't stop laughing...at balladeer's response... geez!! |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Well Michael, I could weave you a story bout what might you call things, but I won't. LOL It's just plain ol MICKEY MOUSE! O =o) See! There's Mickey! ok? O Amazon no truer words than what you spoke! Thank you. Denise thank you, I hope it hit the spot. Doreen thanks a bunch! I know only too well. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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