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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Sighs So Sweetly Shed ~*Marge Tindal*~ Softening summer sounds surround Shushing shrouded sighs so sweetly shed Sharing serenity seemed safely secured Summoning silence surely sealed Spoken Savored Satisfied ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Softly, sweetly spoken sounds sends shivers soaring searching souls silence seeks shedding sighs superb  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
sweet sighs silent sighs special sighs sensual sighs sexy sighs sinful sighs soulful sighs serene sighs simple sighs supreme sighs superb sigh shall i spare you  perfect poem margie-girl jm I think I could need - this in my life I think I'm just scared - that I know too much I can't relate and that's a problem I'm feeling ... If you're gone - maybe it's time to go home There's an awful lot of breathing room But I can hardly move If you're gone - baby you need to come home cuz there's a little bit of something me... In everything in you. ~MB20~ "What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly" ~Lao Tze Tao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
how in the world did you do this? it's simply stupendous! "How do I love thee? Let me count the ways. I love thee to the depth and breadth and height My soul can reach, when feeling out of sight For the ends of Being and ideal Grace." Elizabeth Barrett Browning |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Such simply stated splendid sighs - Bonnie |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Sigh.... Elizabeth And this I say to you: why? Why? Just tell me why, so I can understand. Why? |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Simply super, sunshine surender, special sensual, secrets, remember . L.of.L. Tom . Insanity is a perfectly normal responce to an abnormal world -R.D.Laing.- |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Marge, what a feeling I got reading this one! wow |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Marge,...you are much too talented for me to ever stand next to Haha.....Love this...love your work. You know that though . Take care. *Knew this would be good right as I was opening it. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tracie~ I like your reply. Thanks. JanetMarie~ Enjoyed yours too. Kathleen~ It just fell to the page. So surprising ! BSC~ Thanks, liked your reply. Elizabeth~ Simply said. Thanks. AngelSwing~ Simply thanks. PassingShadows~ Good to see you. SpitFire~ I so apprecite you. Thank you very much. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
SUPER SPECIAL Love,Cerenity |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Superb song simply stupendous!!! LW Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
Marge -- This was amazing! After reading so many of your poems, however, I am not surprised at its perfection. I loved reading it and it left me with a smile on my face...or should I say a sigh on my lips. Wonderful!!! "That man has shown himself great who has never grieved in evil days and never bewailed his destiny." --Seneca |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
This is an alliteration! (cheering that I remembered one of my Lit. terms, lol)...absolutely beautiful Marge, I enjoyed it a lot! *Krista Knutson* "Thought is real, physical is the illusion..." Albert from ~What Dreams May Come~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Simply superior sigh! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Cerenity~ Thank you so much. *Sorry to have been neglectful in my response time. LoneWolf~ Thank you so much. TennesseeAngel~ Here we are into December - Soft remembers of you. Hope you are well, my friend. Krista~ Thanks, gal. Hope you got an A+ in that Lit class. Martie~ So glad to share a *sigh* with you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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