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~Circle of Love~
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~Circle of Love~ |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia 
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 We are two but together we're one < !signature-->A circle of love we have become Warm, sweet, beautiful and tender This circle complete nothing to surrender Life has meaning we have our goals Our circle of love to warm our souls Together we flow like falling cascades A full circle of love that never fades Our love goes round flowing free A circle of love between you and me Our circle of love not yet fully put to the test But I know in my heart that together we'll rest In life and in death we will always be one The circle of our love never to come undone Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe [This message has been edited by tracie66 (edited 06-05-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tracie~ I love circles. Round and round our lives they encircle us ... spinning us into the life of others. Enjoyed your circles, hon. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This was so tender and romantic Tracie, lovely poem! Best wishes, /Kit |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Hello Marge  The circles in our lives are made up of a variety of people who make our lives better, worthwhile, happy and complete and thats what is so special about friends and lovers. Glad you liked my circles Luv Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
The title is perfect, I love it. I love the poem too, a wonderful read! God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Peekaboo Kit I didn't see you You snuck in there Glad you liked this tender little piece..Thanks TC~ EagleOne~ Thanks hon for the wonderful comment you just became part of the circle TC~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
this is beautiful and perfect trac, wisdom and grace from your pen very sweet read  later-poet-gator jm I think I could need - this in my life I think I'm just scared - that I know too much I can't relate and that's a problem I'm feeling ... If you're gone - maybe it's time to go home There's an awful lot of breathing room But I can hardly move If you're gone - baby you need to come home cuz there's a little bit of something me... In everything in you. ~MB20~ "What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly" ~Lao Tze Tao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Tracie~~ Your titles always make me stop and read...always so creative. I LOVED this poem. So beautiful. I especially liked this particular stanza... "Together we flow like falling cascades A full circle of love that never fades Our love goes round flowing free A circle of love between you and me" That is JUST SO BEAUTIFUL!! You are apparently in love my friend...and it looks so well on you! Take care. Amy "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Entwined hands, one in another, Four palms held together form a pair, A circle of love, touch like soft feather, Bloomed flowers, now even life appears fair... Marriage of soul, joining of hearts, There are no more parts, There is no more you nor is there any I, Together in this circled sky we will fly high... ------ Tracie, You have written a beautiful piece of poetry here, felt so good that I got carried away a bit.... regards, sudhir. < !signature--> Hey you, out there in the cold, Getting lonely, getting old, can you feel me? Hey you, standing in the aisle, With itchy feet and fading smile, can you feel me? Hey you, don't help them to bury the light. Don't give in without a fight. Hey you, out there on your own, Sitting naked by the phone, would you touch me? Hey you, with your ear against the wall, Waiting for someone to call out, would you touch me? Hey you, would you help me to carry the stone? Open your heart, I'm coming home.... by Roger Waters (Pink Floyd) - The Wall [This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (edited 06-05-2000).] |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Tracie,..a circle...a continuous symbol...I loved this. You have a beautiful poem here and a wonderful circle of love it seems...so good to know that. Thank you for sharing this. *Peace. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
JM~ Thanks sweetie I don't know about wisdom but it is the way my heart feels..TC~ Hi Aim Thanks sweetie, well I am so lucky to have a wonderful hubby that I'm still in love with after nearly 15yrs together...only hope he's still in love with me TC~ Sudhir~ You amaze me my friend What you have written is truly beautiful and if you don't mind can I print this page with your reply I just melted upon reading it. Thanks hon TC~ Spitfire~ Hello thankyou to sweetie, your reply was appreciated.TC~< !signature--> Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe [This message has been edited by tracie66 (edited 06-07-2000).] |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thanks tracie, thanks... Of course you can print whatever you want, this is after all your page, your poem and a mere few little words from me... regards, sudhir |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Sudhir~ I wouldn't say mere words they were inspiring Trace~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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