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Silent Wishing |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind 
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~~Silent Wishing~~ Alone, Silent... In the dark my mind wanders To thoughts of you. Thoughts of how we embraced, While you kissed my welcoming neck Sending shivers of delight Trembling through my delicate body. Oh again how I wish to feel those kisses, To have you hold me and never let go. So in the dark I am... Silent, Alone... Wishing you here. |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Marie,...such a longing here. So in the dark I am... Silent, Alone... Wishing you here. *Oh how I know of this feeling. Take care...great post...thank you for sharing. *Peace. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Marie this was simply beautiful! god do i know how you feel! excellent writing, intense emotion. take care, amy  "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mariee~ A lovely, longing poem. I like ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
*sigh* oh how well I know... hey marie...nice to see you posting again lovley poem of desire and longing... yes...looooove those neck kisses  but then i never met a kiss I didnt like LOL later-gator jm I think I could need - this in my life I think I'm just scared - that I know too much I can't relate and that's a problem I'm feeling ... If you're gone - maybe it's time to go home There's an awful lot of breathing room But I can hardly move If you're gone - baby you need to come home cuz there's a little bit of something me... In everything in you. ~MB20~ "What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly" ~Lao Tze Tao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Nicely written... enjoyed muchly. |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Yes there is much longing in this piece. I hope the light shines for you soon. God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Silent, Alone.... wishing you here The expression and feeling in this is beautiful Love this poem of yours 66 Love the other 66 Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
Thanks all!! I do APPRECIATE it!! Marie~ |
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