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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... 
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You are The breeze on my face Envelop me The sun on my skin Warm me The rain in my hair Cool me The light in my darkness Show me The joy in my life Smile for me The air I breathe Sustain me The reason for being Inspire me You are my life Love me God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
EagleOne~ Just a simple roadmap to follow ... it's lovely. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
.gif) OOOOOOOOOOO I love this one Simple requests from the heart, but they mean so much and are the hardest to find sometimes. You missed nothing on this, writing from your heart how could you?! Your poetry has reached a new level and I do so love the view!! Soaring High Eagle one  **Angel Wing Hugs** |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Marge.....I think it is the simple things in life that are often the best. I Thank you.Butterfly.....Yes! they mean much and can be hard to find, but definately worth the effort. You are far to free with your priase my friend. I thank you for your comments, and the AWH, both are warmly recievd. God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
The air I breathe Sustain me The reason for being Inspire me ------------ *SIGH* cant ask for much more devotion than that can we... lovely poem Eagle... wonderful expressions of contentment found in another. thank you much for your wonderful replies to my work of late... later-kindpoet-gator, jm I think I could need - this in my life I think I'm just scared - that I know too much I can't relate and that's a problem I'm feeling ... If you're gone - maybe it's time to go home There's an awful lot of breathing room But I can hardly move If you're gone - baby you need to come home cuz there's a little bit of something me... In everything in you. ~MB20~ "What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly" ~Lao Tze Tao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Janet.... I thank you so much for your kind words. As for for my replies, well, your work inspires the reply's ....and you are most welcome! God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Eagle One,...Oh, I absolutely love this. Really, I think it's wonderful. Thank you for such a great read...it's a sure treasure. Take care. *Peace. |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Sometimes the simplest messages are actually the most complex...and meaningful. This spoke to my heart. Thank you so much for sharing it. Peppermint Life is a Wheel |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Refreshing and sweet! I love this one Eagle!  Well done friend. ~Sheri |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
I loved this poem very much. |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
a lovely poem. this love, ow yes. There seems to a romantic feeling in the air at passions lately. Must be the Summer air. wonderful thoughts, enjoyed the poem. < !signature--> ------------------------ "I've been too honest with myself I should have lied like everybody else"-Richey Edwards "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto "Libraries gave us power Then work came and made us free What price now for a shallow piece of dignity" Nicky Wire, A design for Life. manic street preachers "Rock 'n' roll is our epiphany Culture, alienation, boredom and despair" "To be nobody-but-yourself-in a world which is doing its best night and day, to make you everybody else - means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting." E.E Cummings. [This message has been edited by brian madden (edited 06-04-2000).] |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
So few words, yet "wow!" what a powerful punch! This is wonderful...full of that GREAT emotion we call LOVE! Marie~ |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
SpitFire....Once again I thank you for your kind words, I'm glad you enjoyed. It seems I spend a lot of time saying thankyou to you. peppermint35....this piece has that kind of feel, doesn't it? Thankyou for reading. Irie.....Thankyou for taking the time to read and comment. I'm so glad you liked it. vandana......Thanks for reading, glad you liked it. Brian....."somthing in the air"...mmm..I was thinking the same thing just now. Thanks! Marie.....Thankyou so much for your comments. Janet.....if you happen to pop back in this is the one I would choose for your challenge. < !signature--> God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown [This message has been edited by EagleOne (edited 06-04-2000).] |
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REBECCA ALLYN Member
since 2000-05-09
Posts 91Lima,Ohio |
Beautiful words, you truly are a poet!!! Love your work as always LOTS of LUV, Becky |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Rebecca.....There are some who would argue that statement, mostly me.....LOL. Thanks for stopping by and commenting, take care! God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Eddie - you have been most busy in my absence from passions I see! This is a lovely piece of work - well done as always my friend xx Ciao Bello Roniece |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
As always Roniece I thankyou for your valued comments. Your absence has been noticed, I have missed you my friend. You know me Roniece I try to stay busy and keep out of trouble..lol, what better way than to write! We will catch up soon. Ciao Bella Eddie God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
EagleOne~ This is so tender and warm, very meanigful. Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
EagleOne~ something about this really struck a note with me. so simple yet so beautiful at the same time. you paint some lovely expressions here and make the reader smile! thanks so much. take care, amy "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Tracie.....Thankyou!, I'm glad you found something in it. Amy......I thank you for your wonderful comments. The gift of a smile is the greatest gift. God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
very passionate, beautiful similies of love |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Back to the top for another read Very nice poetry  Coco |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Oh, thy love is so sweet, A poetry treat, That other brave knights compete, This fair maiden is touched, To read such poetry makes one blush... THIS SHOULD BE THE ONE FOR THE CHALLENGE TO SVEN! |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Rosebud.....Thankyou for your time in reading and replying. Coco....I'm glad you like it! Romantic Heart....Thankyou so much for reading, and your reply. I'm not sure it would be ethical to post this for Sven's challenge as was writen prior to the challenge. I thank one and all for reading and responding. I am overwhelmed by the replies,. Thankyou! God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown |
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