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Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

0 posted 2000-06-03 08:05 PM

Behind the scenes.

Scene One:

Where is your
    strength and
              independence?……

  i've mislead, i've deceived
    i'm artificial and plastic
        how can you live this
                façade?

Scene Two:

couldn't you wait?
    you're a selfish brat.
        impolite, crude
   and insensitive……

sorry my dears
       note "dears"
    i'll try to be
        who you want me
                to be
                   when you
   want me to be
     I'll change for you
            at the flick
                of a switch
                          easy.


Dark Angel

Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain."
I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow
(unkown)

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

1 posted 2000-06-03 09:02 PM

I see pain and bitterness in this poem and some strength...go with the strength! Hugs!

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

2 posted 2000-06-03 10:42 PM

Thanks Martie.. planning to

Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain."
I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow
(unkown)

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

3 posted 2000-06-03 11:45 PM

That sounds like an awful lot of work trying to please everybody else. I'd rather prefer to just be myself and let the chips fall where they may. Which I'm sure is just what you plan to do! Great poem, Dark Angel!

Denise

Butterflies_dont_cry
Member Elite

since 2000-03-06

Posts 3733
Michigan

4 posted 2000-06-03 11:50 PM

Deep, Powerful and Painfilled. Your work always speaks to me Dark Angel and this one speaks loudly!! Thank you for sharing this, I understand.

Tennessee Angel
Senior Member

since 2000-06-03

Posts 661
Tennessee

5 posted 2000-06-03 11:55 PM

I really enjoyed this one, Dark Angel! You have an awesome talent. I find myself looking through the posts for your name. Thank you for sharing your gift.

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

6 posted 2000-06-04 05:09 PM

Denise, thank you.

BDC its nice to know that my poetry speaks to you

thats so lovely... Thanks for your lovely reply.

TA, wow thank you for your kind reply, I find myself looking for your poetry as well

Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain."
I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow
(unkown)

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