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Lessons from Rock and River..........reposted for Cerenity-1
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Lessons from Rock and River..........reposted for Cerenity-1 |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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Lessons from Rock and River Sky dark clouds dense charcoal the rain stitching lines from sky to earth in the canyon next to the river listen the river flows passed hard and stable rock two different forms of matter each by uniqueness gives importance to the other a perfect relationship Harmonize with things that flow by you like the rock I think then thunder trembles the sky to open the flowing current steady pounding the river surges sending hard and stable rock careening far The rock as others catch against it changes the path of the river The worlds ever changing nothing stays the same I think |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Martie~ This is just awesome ! I don't believe I saw it before. What a remarkable piece. The flow of the river of life changed by the rock ... Who'da thunk it ! YOU I think ! Love it .. love you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
You are just AMAZING Martie, this is an Awesome poem.. these lines .... The rock as others catch against it changes the path of the river The worlds ever changing nothing stays the same how true! loved it  Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain." I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow (unkown) |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Martie, You have made my heart tremble in sheer delight for I knew the rocks could speak, needing of answers to this changing life of mine you have giving me the realizum of things that I could not harmonize with before. The rain has been pouring but I think that there is relief insight and if it calls for change that is OK change might be good. Thank you so much for sharing this, Love, Cerenity |
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