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Confused(my first poem)
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Confused(my first poem) |
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Angelical Face New Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 6 |
Confused I don't know what's going on... I don't feel anything... The love is ending... Why? Why did it happen? Everything is changing... I don't know if I want it... I don't know what I want... What will I do? I'm confused... I'm always confused... I don't know what's going on... I'm feeling something... I've just arrived and I saw the love... I thought that I was not in love... But when I see... I don't know what happens... I don't know what to do... What will I do? I'm confused... I'm always confused... |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Welcome to Passions, Angelical Face! Sometimes life can be very confusing. Please check your email for a special welcome! Denise |
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Angelical Face New Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 6 |
Thanks for the warm welcome! I'm just sad you were the only one that replied... |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Don't worry Hun... You'll get more replies!  So many poems get posted here it's hard to keep up with all of them. Not to mention, it's the weekend and people are out and about. I hope your confusion will fade in time! Best wishes to you and Welcome to the Passions Family!  ~Sheri |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to Passions! We have all been in that confused state at one time or another, but that's why being poets is so great! We can write about it. Keep writing!  |
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Slashed soul Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 86England |
A poem of woe, I see you write, on this subject, i'll shed some light, love is strange, and sometimes pains, but fear not, there is always sunshine after rain. love your poem, I have too felt the confusion! -secret-It wont last forever.. -Rich-the soon to divorce man!!! -taste the freedom once more, but the beds still empty at night, oh for a woman  ) |
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David2 Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 407 |
Hi! Welcome to passions! Your poem was very thought provoking and emotional . I enjoyed reading it. David2 |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A |
Wow!! Nice job. The way your ideas would begin and then suddenly end and then go into another idea that would do the same truly expresses the wishy-washiness of what confusion is...keep it up. Jeremy Halstead |
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Angelical Face New Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 6 |
Thanks Irie, Poet deVine, Slashed Soul, David2 & Jeremy! I'm glad you guys liked my poem, and thanks for the advises I'm sure this confusion won't last forever... |
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Lone Ranger Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 92Salvador , Bahia , Brazil |
Welcome to passions! Looking forward to more from you... and I have a doubt... when you say:"But when I see..." what or who do you see that leaves you like this, breathless? anyway, great poem! "Only in the dreams , is that man can truly be free It was always thus and always thus will be" Prof. Keating Dead Poets Society |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Welcome to passions!!!!!! Enjoyed it. |
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Bunny Junior Member
since 2000-05-13
Posts 30 |
Let me just say I really liked your poem.....I prefer sad poetry and sometimes my poems stand out awkwardly in the sea of lovy dovy poems that the forums have. It was nice to read another poem that swayed to a sadder side, good work! |
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Lorraine Nisbet Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 218Jersey City, NJ USA |
Hi, Angelical Face! Really enjoyed your poem. Welcome to Passions! ~Lorraine A great poet is nothing more....than a discovered amateur |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Hi and welcome to passions! Corinne |
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Angelical Face New Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 6 |
Thanks Lone Ranger, Vandana, Bunny, Lorraine & Corinne, glad you guys liked it! Oh, and Bunny, don't get too excited because i'm not really a sad person... Paula Elis |
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REBECCA ALLYN Member
since 2000-05-09
Posts 91Lima,Ohio |
I completly understand confusion!! I really like your work, please keep writing!!! LOTS of LUV, Becky |
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