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No Fly Zones" (Haiku)
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No Fly Zones" (Haiku) |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA 
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Oh, a stopping place All rolled out for me waiting I think I'm attached! Looks like all is clear Right out here in the open-- Swat!(now that's dead wrong)! "GOD GIVES- but man must open his hand." (German Proverb) |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
You are dead right, David I haven't mastered the haiku yet But I can swat a fly This is delightful Liz |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Very good!!! I love this.  |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Dear David; What a delightful surprise! This is very funny! LOL! Are there an inordinate amount of flies in Michigan? I'm glad you got there safely, Bro. Love, Big Sis 02 |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
David~ Very nicely done Swatting at flies on the run Landing zone is clear Enjoyed your humor !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Now just look at yourself!! Aren't you having fun and this is a GREAT one. Your humor is swatting around. (What is a Haiku?) Really, really like this one. Miss ya!marcy |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I haven't been able to do these either. Glad to see that you gave it a try, David! Very cute! Denise |
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