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prinzezz15_4eva New Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 7 |
What If... By: Ashley E. What if I could go back and right all the wrongs I cursed upon you. What if I could take back all the broken and empty promises, and all the hurt I've put you through. What if you'd give me another chance, and one agian we could share the love we had. What if once again I could mean everything to you, and for one brief moment in time I could be all you wanted and needed. What if I could have been secure, with the feelings I had for you, and not have been afraid for you to look into my eyes and see the real me. What if I could have let myself go then and allow my emtions to lead me to a world of happiness that I could have shared with you for all time. All these things I realize now...but I realize it all to late,...but what if you hadn't of moved on would you forgive me and free me of my world of pain. All these things I'll never know. And now I live with the regret thinking... What if... |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Those 'What if's' can drive you crazy, that's for sure. This is very good, Ashley! Denise |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
A very hard place to be! Nice poem. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Ashley~ I'm a big "what if" person....... can't seem to help it. This is a great poem.  -SEA |
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Lone Ranger Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 92Salvador , Bahia , Brazil |
Ashley... what if, this is something i've been asking myself for the last couple of months and do you know what i realized? it's not worth to sit around wondering what if we have to fix the probems ourselves and create the opportunities so that we shall never ask these wuastion ever again... good poem! "Only in the dreams , is that man can truly be free It was always thus and always thus will be" Prof. Keating Dead Poets Society |
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