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MagnoliaBlue
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since 2000-05-12

Posts 367

0 posted 2000-06-02 12:50 PM

~Sometimes~

Sometimes I lie thinking in
The wee hours of night

Wanting you with me
I know that’s not right.

We have no ties
              Only sweet memories of two

Perhaps its time to move on
              Not think so much of you.

Sometimes I lie awake in
The wee hours of night

Wondering who is sharing your bed

And I have to stop thinking
Get those thoughts out of my head.

We have no ties
              Only sweet memories of two

Perhaps its time to move on
              think so much about you.

Sometimes I bring your face before me
And I can only think of

Sweet memories of two

Perhaps its time to move on
Not care so much for you.

©1975~CJB~

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 2000-06-02 01:22 PM

Yes, sometimes it is very hard to move on. This expresses that wonderfully!

Denise

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

2 posted 2000-06-02 04:17 PM

Good work. Thoughtful.

Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau"

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

3 posted 2000-06-02 05:34 PM

beautiful!!! are you in my head or something? you have read my thoughts hon and wrote them perfectly. i know all too well this feeling you describe. keep up the excellent writing...i look forward to reading more from you.

take care!
Amy

"Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends."

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Jana Tovey
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since 2000-05-30

Posts 257
USA

4 posted 2000-06-02 05:52 PM

I like this poem. It sounds like this person is jut on the edge of a breakthrough.

That's nice...to see a poem about getting over something and going on.

MagnoliaBlue
Member

since 2000-05-12

Posts 367

5 posted 2000-06-02 05:53 PM

Thanks for the flowers everyone. The comments help a lot.

Amy...Maybe you were inside my head and I just wrote what you told me to.

I hope these feelings I describe are in the past for you,Amy... as they are for me!

MBlue

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