»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #7
»
True Feelings
| Open Poetry #7 |
|
True Feelings |
|
|
Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC 
|
True Feelings Amy M. Kennedy It's two AM in the morning and at the wall I do stare Wishing with all my heart and soul that you were here or I was there This pain is killing me softly inside But from it there is nowhere for me to hide I love you so much, and I know you feel the same way Wishing like hell you didn't have to leave that day Forever an eternity I could be with you But I'll settle for a minute a day or maybe two You complete me and make me all that I am and want to be And for the rest of our days I'll make you happy...you'll see. "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." |
||
| © Copyright 2000 Amy Kennedy - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
ParisGrl Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 610 |
Amy, such a beautiful moving poem. i love it. I hope that you get the person you want. If not you could always be friends. Laura |
||
|
SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Amy,...this is so heartfelt...so wonderfully written. Hope all your dreams come true. *Peace. |
||
LoveBug
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Amy, I know this feeling very well. You do a beautiful job of describing it. It will all work out, everything has a way of turning out for the best. "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
||
|
Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
time will tell, just keep telling them how you feel and give it all time... somethings take longer to work thru something are worth the wait There are places inside our souls ... that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts ... that need to be loved this much. ~Janet Marie~ "What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly" ~Lao Tze Tao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
||
|
Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Amy, Your heart is coming out of that pen...so touching and lovely. I hope that things work out for you. They say...good things come to those who wait....I hope so for you! Great writing!  Lone Wolf Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
||
|
Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Excellent writing Amy! Marina |
||
|
Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
 This is so sad...yet so full of hope. Lovely work... K |
||
|
vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Nice work. |
||
|
CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Amy, this one is so nice it gently speaks from the heart. I just was roaming thru the site and felt I needed to read some of your verses before I go .. nite nite Coco |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
