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Skinny Dipping With Rosemary
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Skinny Dipping With Rosemary |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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This poem of little tidbits is of Rosemary's telling, in her responses to our poetry. Her endearing candor has been a source of delight and quite a few chuckles. Thanks for your sweetness, Rosemary. Skinny Dipping With Rosemary She’s throws her garments on the grass And slowly slithers in The sparkling creek churns happily And dances round her skin The waters are as clear as glass Cool liquid still prestine While Dale sits by with sparkling eye Devouring the scene She bathes in showers gentle splash But instinct begs for more Then nonchalantly drops her towel Upon the hardwood floor Leaving pure imagination Blowing in the wind While Dale sits by with eager eye That slowly takes it in They sit and write their poetry With parchment and a plume Beside the flowing waters In the thralls of honeymoon Aesthetic recall of sheer joy Was always my belief What wondrous bliss sparks reminisce Of just one dangling leaf The things that dance inside her mind They are of passions brew Experiences the likes of which Are known to very few What deeds of dare that she would share The best with likes of us The laughs I reap from her mystique Are really quite a plus So throw restraint into the wind And let your hair hang down Enjoy the day in every way And we’ll just hang around Way to go, Rosemary! Love ya, Liz |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
You are a wonderful poet, Elizabeth!  Denise |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Oh, Liz...This is lovely! You have captured some of her essence here with your poem and Dale's too. They are going to be so pleased ...I can just see them now, Rosemary discovering it first and reading it out loud to Dale. Smiles to you, my sweet friend. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
 felt like I was hiding behind a bush or something....LOL the imagery was so real. sorry Rosemary and Dale I wasn't really peaking. This was wonderful to read Liz, I really did enjoy the vision....I better stop right now before I get into trouble. Great Poem Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Lovely poem, Liz!! I bet Rosemary will totally love it! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
I'm feeling a little voyeuristic after that wonderful read Liz! Excellent and so full of imagery. I really enjoyed this ... well done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lizzie~ When Rosemary sees it ... she's going to be thrilled ... Dale will smile knowingly. I loved the voyeurism. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
takes me back to another time and place...simply lovely Kathleen indy31_99@yahoo.com |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
I'm not real clear on this skinnnnny thing... All she told me was that she was going down stairs to take a shower... and then I wake up to find ya all's gone crunchy peanut butter... Do you have any idea what time it is..? Go back to bed..! |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
Hey, Liz! Imagine my surprise at being wakened at six something by my darling husband in paroxysms of roaring laughter, sitting at his computer some six or eight feet from our bed! "What on earth is funny?" I ask sleepily, and when he tells me, between gasps, still laughing, what Elizabeth has written, I have to come out and see! Now that you've got me giggling so hard my eyes are watering, I just have to tell you thank you! We're both going to bed now, with smiles from ear to ear. He was on one of those all-night writing things, and I gave up my own writing about three, and crawled in. Good thing we don't have little children any more. Getting a weeeee bit older has very distinct advantages! Thanks again, for the best laugh we've enjoyed in quite some time! And that's saying a lot, because we do a lot of laughing together. But you, my friend, take the cake! You're good, Elizabeth; you're really good! |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Liz - Finally! An easy decision today - I agree with Rosemary (and everybody else) that you are one amazin' lady. What a talent! Loved every line and twist. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Elizabeth! Why, I never! Stopped laughing that is! |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Liz, You had me at the first sight of the title. But the contents are spectactular and very loving of you Liz, they sound like they have a wonderful life together and much love. Very much enjoyed. Love, Cerenity |
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