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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC 
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Lilac Dreams < !signature-->By Amy M. Kennedy The day is coming to an end...the sun is setting low A field of lilacs surrounds me as the wind softly blows Your image comes softly to me, an angel's face And I can feel the powerfulness of your beauty, your never-ending grace Whether you are in my dreams or my reality I want you always and forever, for an eternity Skies turning different colors, pink, red, yellow, and blue Watching as your plane is about to take off, temporarily seperating me and you Birds singing as the trees begin to sway And I am wishing with an intense burning that I could save this day Memories play back through my mind, and it brings a smile to my lips As I think about when you and I shared that first magical kiss The plane takes off into the sky Tears slowly fall down my cheeks as I wave goodbye I'll hold you close to my heart until we can be together once more I love you today and always, with all that I am...our love will fly with the angels...together we will soar "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." [This message has been edited by Aimster (edited 05-31-2000).] |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Amy* This is filled with the scent of saddness and heart touching beauty. Lilacs are my Favorite so you touched on my heart with this one...and after reading it through you touched very deeply. **Hugs** to you Miss Amy! ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ (a gift from my S.S.) |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
The day is coming to an end...the sun is setting low A field of lilacs surrounds me as the wind softly blows Your image comes softly to me, an angel's face And I can feel the powerfulness of your beauty, your never-ending grace Whether you are in my dreams or my reality I want you always and forever, for an eternity ---------------- AMY!!!!! WOW WOW... I LOVE THIS!! this is by far your best poem... your muse is on fire girl.. this poem is breathtaking. this is an new level of writing for you my girl!! MORE PLEASE  jm There are places inside our souls ... that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts ... that need to be loved this much. ~Janet Marie~ "What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly" ~Lao Tze Tao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"y'never know when you're making a memory...they will wish they were here together again, someday..." Ricki Lee Jones well, that is what this reminded me of, lovely work, here Amy....enjoyed this much. |
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ParisGrl Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 610 |
Amy, Why did you let this person get on that plane??? I would have tracked him down and handcuffed him to my hip. LOL I love your expression in this piece, its very sentimental. you must share alot of memories with this person that you love. hope it works out for you. Laura |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wonderfully expressed Amy ... I felt you right there in the airport! Such a touching "good-bye" well done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Amy~ So tenderly done that I felt myself waving goodbye with your heart. Hey .... remember they sell round-trip tickets !  This was truly a lovely flight on the wings of a loving heart. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lovely, heart-felt poem, Amy! |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Wanted to tell you guys thanks very much for posting such high encouragement and lovely responses. this was a very hard poem for me to post as it is filled with much sadness...but i also have to say it is my favorite poem written by me as of yet. take care! amy  "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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Lorraine Nisbet Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 218Jersey City, NJ USA |
Amy, Lovely...Lovely...Lovely! ~Lorraine A great poet is nothing more....than a discovered amateur |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Amy, This is sad and one you can ride with you through the words and feel the emotions, very well done and I hope your union is very sone my dear, thank you for sharing it. Love, Cerenity |
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MagnoliaBlue Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 367 |
Amy... ~Watching as your plane is about to take off, temporarily seperating me and you.... The plane takes off into the sky Tears slowly fall down my cheeks as I wave goodbye~ This made me cry right out loud...My Skipper and I did this same thing on June 1st...2 days ago...My ache joined yours in this poem. Thanks for the company and for saying this for me. Hugs, June (MagnoliaBlue) |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
It just made me want to cry! It brought back memories of friends and loved ones that I let slip away. Very touching. |
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