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~ Treasured Desire ~
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~ Treasured Desire ~ |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
We hear so much of a love on line I felt this verse has a cute lil rhyme So here I dare I give it a whirl a lil rhyme to share with the world! ~ Treasured Desire ~ A switch is clicked a screen lights up Entering their cyber world they hook up Words are exchanged and written on screen Feelings and passion shared by two unique beings Distance between them and miles they are apart Beating hearts is all these two have found I love you's, I need you's and I want you's Expressed so eloquently A romance a bliss shared by two unique beings Never before have they snared a lovers kiss Still they feel its passion and tenderness Destiny it was when they first met She removed the chills from beneath his sweat Wrapping her heart around his own Never again do two unique beings feel alone In their world they are each other's dreams Bringing to life their innermost feelings Fantasies ablaze with their passionate fires A one of a kind frienship a treasured desire.  Coco |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
i like this lots its the story of me and my wife as well...how do you pronounce the second part of your name and what does the name mean cuz i love it alot i go around sayin coco baci coco baci |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Does this actually happen? LOL Good poem!! And please answer Walt, he's driving us nuts singing cocobaci.. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
PDV - thank you for your kind words I'll try to settle down Walt from singing those words Walt - I can't stop the giggling from the comments you write here's the answer to what has you chanting about .. Coco .. chocolate Baci .. kisses (prounced as Bah-chee) |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
a wonderful poem Cocobaci, lovely rhyme, I though that in my rhyme I might reply it is just I am not very good at it. a loevely poem.------------------------ "Here chewing your tail is joy" Richey Edwards "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto "Will you accuse me as I hide Behind these layers of disguise And the mirrors of my own happiness.I've loved the freedom of being inside Need a new start and a different time Something grows in the space between me And it's twisting and changing this fragile body" -Nicky Wire |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Brian, your comments are so sweet!  Coco |
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Jana Tovey Member
since 2000-05-30
Posts 257USA |
Eloquently put. Love always finds a way, or a line, or an internet server...oops! |
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Holly Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 127Arkansas |
Oh how these words ring so true in this poem! For anyone that has been captivated by someone they "met" online knows this all too well...oh, not that I would know any of this personally. LOL  peace & all, -Holly I know well what I am fleeing from but not what I am in search of. Michel de Montaigne |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Excellent Coco, this has been true for some friends of mine. . . and you have captured the feelings here quite well. Wonderful poem!! -------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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