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Sunshine = Rainbows
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Sunshine = Rainbows |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Sunshine = Rainbows In my window there is magic for all the world to see tiny beautiful prisms of glass make my rainbows for me. God let me take my name said "Sunshine, let's play a game and if you hang my magic right we may play games, day and night." For in the tiny prisms of glass then the rainbows comes to pass and in the dark, thus in their gleam I see the promise of tomorrow's dream. For in my window's mind I see prisms of rainbows for you and me. ©KRJ 29 May 2000 Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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Bessy41 Junior Member
since 2000-04-25
Posts 12 |
This reminds me of when I was a child and my dad would give me prisms to occupy my mind!! Great stuff!!! |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
A tiny spherical shiny droplet, Falling from heaven's lap, Sunshine through the rain-clouds, wet, Splits light into a radiant rainbow .. Karilea, this one is another beautiful piece of work from you...it seems that you are becoming totally religious...in the name of God, may you prosper... regards, sudhir Hey you, out there in the cold, Getting lonely, getting old, can you feel me? Hey you, standing in the aisle, With itchy feet and fading smile, can you feel me? Hey you, don't help them to bury the light. Don't give in without a fight. Hey you, out there on your own, Sitting naked by the phone, would you touch me? Hey you, with your ear against the wall, Waiting for someone to call out, would you touch me? Hey you, would you help me to carry the stone? Open your heart, I'm coming home.... by Roger Waters (Pink Floyd) - The Wall |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
For in the tiny prisms of glass then the rainbows comes to pass and in the dark, thus in their gleam I see the promise of tomorrow's dream. Beautiful Sunshine.  Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain." I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow (unkown) |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
So sweet and visual Sunshine ... I can see the little twinkling colours catching my eyes now, as they dance across my mind. Well done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Bunny Junior Member
since 2000-05-13
Posts 30 |
This poem was a very bright, cheery, pick-me up poem! It even puts pictures into your head while you read it and it takes you away from your everyday stresses. Thanks for posting it |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
It takes Sunshine to make rainbows And a rainbow to make dreams It takes dreams to make the sun shine Through the window where it gleams And a girl the name of Sunshine With the voice of angel streams Through the rainbow colored window In the prism of my dreams And how do I know she has the voice of an angel? A little birdie told me Lovely, Sunshine Liz |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Bessy - exactly!... Sudhir - applaud the addition, thank you!... DarkAngel, thank you for pulling out your favorite passage... Kit - thank you!... Bunny, that's me, the stress reliever... Elizabeth, what a wonderful addition...and no, I only "hear" angels voices...LOL! Thank you... |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Beautiful Sunshine .. HUSG |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah Cindy, I hoped you would find it! Hugs... |
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