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~Whispering Wind~
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~Whispering Wind~ |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia 
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Whispering Wind She can touch you with her gentle breeze Which brush past you with soft plea's Plea's of longing to gently flow through your mind To touch your soul and heart so Blind She whispers softly touching words and you soon become one She wraps around you begging you to follow her to the sun So she can warm you and keep you safe Whispering wind softly whispers the faith She'll spirit you away to help show you the light hopefully soon it is in sight Go with the wind of gentle breeze And listen carefully to her plea's You may find yourself following her to the sun Where you and her are bound to become one Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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shilpi Member
since 2000-05-24
Posts 73 |
Tracie, I am glad I read this one....felt so soothing, was like I could actually hear the plea's !! regards, shilpi |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Now THIS is great! Made me feel like I was floating about as I read this! Well done Tracie |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
shilpi~ Hi welcome to passions  thanks for your lovely comment. I wrote this the other night it came from nowhere and I think it is rather spiritual don't you think so.Tracie~ Irie~ A welcome to you to I'm glad you liked this and thanks for replying.Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Tracie, I can hear the wind blowing. . . and so can he. . . Just very tender my friend. . . Excellent. . . -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
This is beautiful Tracie. Well Done. Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain." I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow (unkown) |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
Oh, beautiful, exquisite poem! Thank you for sharing it! I know that wind. Ah, yes, I know that wind. Keep writing, my dear friend, keep writing!!! ~ ~ ~ The spiritual wind that holds survivors aloft, plants the seeds from which bloom new hope ... R.J.G. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Very gentle and sweet ... a lovely poem Tracie ... Best wishes, /Kit |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh, little Tracie~ How the sweet spirit of the wind whispered to your heart for this lovley poem. Yes, spiritual indeed. To be at one with the wind is a marvelous thing. When it blows you into another's path that is even more miraculous. We are one in spirit. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
wonderful. Plea's of longing to gently flow through your mind To touch your soul and heart so Blind beautiful poem. ------------------------ "Isn't it enough to see that a garden is beautiful without having to believe that there are fairies at the bottom of it too? " Douglas Adams. "Here chewing your tail is joy" Richey Edwards "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto "Do not listen to a word I say Just listen to what I can keep silent" Nicky Wire |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Wow,what a lovely poem.I love it!!!!! |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
tracie-- i loved this! very expressive piece you have here...like the others i too felt as though i was floating on air...pure magic you created in this one! take care, amy "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Tracie, as always reading the verses you write just touch my heart and reach into my soul .. a pleasure indeed to come across your poetry. Coco |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
such beauty...this flows like the wind itself....exceptional work. *Krista Knutson* "Thought is real, physical is the illusion..." Albert from ~What Dreams May Come~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
She can touch you with her gentle breeze Which brush past you with soft plea's Plea's of longing to gently flow through your mind To touch your soul and heart so Blind She whispers softly touching words and you soon become one She wraps around you begging you to follow her to the sun ------------ Tracie-girl this is indeed exquisite!! this is one of your best and one of my most favs. soothing, sensual, and spirtual. wondeful imagery and emotions expressed featherlight and perfect flow later T-gator, jm Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme, They are not measured by the commitment of time. Some emotions run too deep to be described by words, Forgiveness and understanding-remain the most beautiful words ever heard. ~Janet Marie~ "What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly" ~Lao Tze Tao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Like the lag in the spacing... allows for a thoughtful picture. Nice gentle touch. If I could paint a portrait, of this life in which I've led, and somehow sketch a story, of the visions in my head, I'd start out with a canvas, stretched tightly in a frame, and in the bottom corner, I'd leave room to sign my name. (Michelle A. Bartley) |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Pretty words from a beautiful heart Loved it, Tracie Liz |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
WOW...I didn't expect to see so many replies upon my return tonight thanks Sven~ Thankyou for reading dear friend, I was glad you liked it. Tracie~ Dark Angel~ So pleased you liked this and thanks. Tracie~ Rosemary~ Yes indeed, I thought you'd know that wind. Just very soothing isn't she. Thanks Tracie~ Kit~ Thanks and best wishes to you to Tracie~ Marge my sweet friend I knew you would like this and I was right the spiritual wind is one we would all like to be as one with. thanks for reading.Luv Tracie~ Brian~ Glad you liked this and thanks for your reply. Tracie~ Vandana~ Thankyou for your sweet reply Tracie~ Aimster~ pleased to have created a little bit of magic for you Tracie~ Coco~ You're a little treasure, what lovely words you have said here and I thank you indeed Tracie~ Alwye~ I hope she blows your way. Tracie~ Janet Marie~ You know just what to say and I thank you for reading this and commenting so sweetly means alot to know this is a fav of yours.Take care Tracie~ Lucky~ Buddy O mine  glad you liked, does mean alot. take care Tracie~ Liz~ So glad you read this and my next words are going to sound soppy but I was actually thinking of you when posting this. Hope your o'kay and take care. Tracie~ < !signature--> Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe [This message has been edited by tracie66 (edited 05-30-2000).] |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Peekaboo,...this one hasn't seen it all yet. I absolutely love this piece. *Sigh*,..what a wonderful feeling this brought on. I feel like I'm floating...your words are beautiful. Thank you for posting such a treasure. *Peace. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Whispering wind, sweetly made sweet melodies in my ears... Wonderful work, Tracie. Regards, sudhir Hey you, out there in the cold, Getting lonely, getting old, can you feel me? Hey you, standing in the aisle, With itchy feet and fading smile, can you feel me? Hey you, don't help them to bury the light. Don't give in without a fight. Hey you, out there on your own, Sitting naked by the phone, would you touch me? Hey you, with your ear against the wall, Waiting for someone to call out, would you touch me? Hey you, would you help me to carry the stone? Open your heart, I'm coming home.... by Roger Waters (Pink Floyd) - The Wall |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
 Peekaboo back to you Hello little spitfire thank you for your most gracious comments Tracie~ Sudhir~ Hi my friend, I hope your ears always here sweet melodies thats what they deserve Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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