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Open Poetry #7

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Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

0 posted 2000-04-20 01:02 AM

In my eyes
I will always see
The sight of love
Beautiful to me

With my ears
I will always hear
The voice of love
Calming my fear

From my mouth
I will always speak
The words of love
That make you weak

With my hands
I will always feel
The touch of love
Seeking to heal

With my heart
I will always give
The joy of love
For as long as I live

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Jeffrey Carter

Member Elite

since 2000-04-08

Posts 2367
State of constant confusion!

1 posted 2000-04-20 01:04 AM

Sven,
Beautiful poem
Jeffrey

Poet deVine

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

2 posted 2000-04-20 01:15 AM

In this poem
is a voice of
love..

very good..

Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

3 posted 2000-04-20 01:17 AM

so sweet and loving.

corinne

Meadowmuse
Member Elite

since 1999-12-27

Posts 3263

4 posted 2000-04-20 01:22 AM

Such dedication and tender declaration of trust...beautiful words, beautiful message, Sven.

~ Claire

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

5 posted 2000-04-20 02:47 AM

These read to me like wedding vows, Sven...
simple, beautiful, and startling as naked sincerity often is....i've been undone.

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2000-04-20 10:05 PM

Excellent poem, Sven. Hope she likes it...

Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

devina
Member Elite

since 1999-10-28

Posts 3539
Cali

7 posted 2000-04-21 12:39 PM

Ah...so sweet the words of love Sven...

*hoping to hear those myself one day!*

Keep makin em swoon my dear man!!!

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

8 posted 2000-04-21 12:41 PM

Sven~
Another fine romantic poem, this is soo beautiful.
Tracie~

Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks

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