Open Poetry #7 |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
[This message has been edited by lucky (edited 06-01-2000).] |
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Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This is so dear and heartwarming Lucky ... it's just lovely ... Best wishes, /Kit |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
I always loved the word pearl, for some strange reason. your poem was beautiful, miniature mystic wand my loving little girl curled and tucked lightly in my arms such tiny delicate hands playing on daz lazy airs such a faery-dusted dream to calm my storms of grief and freshen these weary seasons hear. reading it almost felt like a spell was been cast, magical. ------------------------ "Isn't it enough to see that a garden is beautiful without having to believe that there are fairies at the bottom of it too? " Douglas Adams. "Here chewing your tail is joy" Richey Edwards "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto "Do not listen to a word I say Just listen to what I can keep silent" Nicky Wire |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Kit, I meant to have a picture of our little girl in there. Sucks didn't work... Some people have all the luck. This is actually something that RJ. wrote... I just love her so much... well, you could see it on our site. Thanks so much... Love ya, Dale |
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Lorraine Nisbet Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 218Jersey City, NJ USA |
Lucky, Absolutely lovely! ~Lorraine A great poet is nothing more....than a discovered amateur |
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