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Lindsay Kaznowski
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since 2000-05-27
Posts 23


0 posted 2000-05-27 09:49 PM


                Us..
                                                      
  I'll always be there for you...
  Standing at your side...
  Sometimes I may be hard to see...
  Just remember...
  I'll always be with you...
  In your heart, is where I sleep...

  One day, a time from now...
  That special man will break your heart...
  For, you've always known...
  I've been there for you...
  But now I'm gone...
  Our lives split in two...
  Truly no flesh and blood could take my place...
  Just remember...
  I'll always be with you...
  In your heart, is where I sleep...

  I told you that I would  never leave...
  But, you closed your heart to me...
  You wanted me to stay so bad...
  I could not bear to leave...
  But, when that tragic time arose...
  I knew I had to go...
  Your heart so slowly broke away...
  Leaving me to weep...

      -Princess

  You told me that I lied to you...
  A  promise lay there broken...
  So now you look back, sad & lonely...
  But, no, your heart is closed to me...
  Never will I be...
  In your heart, I find no sleep...

  Now, your heart grows old and heavy...
  Slowly do you fall to sleep...
  A light so big and bright now shines...
  And closer does that dear voice weep...
  You see so close that  friendly shadow...
  In it's arms you lay...
  So fast is this to happen...
  And a truth to this must wait...

  A  friendship made for millions...
  Can not be broken in death...
  Yet, it lives in heartship...
  And in heaven does it rest...

  
  

  



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1 posted 2000-05-27 11:14 PM


Welcome to the family! I really liked this...and look forward to reading more from you. Please check your email for a special message.  
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2 posted 2000-05-27 11:24 PM


Lindsay~
Such lovely thoughts you've brought with your first post.
Welcome to Passion's.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
3 posted 2000-05-28 05:33 AM


Nice start here from you, Lindsay.
!!!!!!!!!!!!WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


regards, sudhir

 Life is like a painting,
That in an art gallery is left hanging,
Though many come just to look at it,
A very few actually come to enjoy it.

Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada
4 posted 2000-05-28 08:49 AM


This was lovely Lindsay ... I look forward to more, Welcome to Passions!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Lindsay Kaznowski
Junior Member
since 2000-05-27
Posts 23

5 posted 2000-05-28 11:12 AM


~Everyone~
Thanx so much for sharing your thoughts about my poem, and welcoming me into your family. I'm honored and I know I'm going to be really happy here! I'm a new writer so I'm hoping to get more of my poems out. Thank you, again.

-Princess (Linds)

Lorraine Nisbet
Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 218
Jersey City, NJ USA
6 posted 2000-05-28 03:09 PM



Lindsay,

What a lovely first post.  Welcome.  Looking forward to reading more.

~Lorraine

 
A great poet is nothing more....than a discovered amateur


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