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hoppy Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 271 |
To hear the waves crashing at your feet And see the breeze blow your hair aside. To reveal the delecate perfection beneith, For the sun to softly caress your silhouette As I hold you carefully with mine own eyes . I pray one day you'll take a second glance; Maybe then the story will be complete, So we can finish our first last dance There's a fine line between genius and insanity. I have erased this line. -- Oscar Levant "Death is not the greatest loss in life. The greatest loss is what dies inside us while we live." |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
This poem is written well enough to receive recognition for some very nice images. Nice work, hoppy. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
"so we can finish our first last dance" love the juxaposition of the 'first last'... several other effective lines in here... enjoyed! thanks |
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