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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Hearts afire strong desire to admire What'll transpire Lover's leap passion reap bodies heap Nothing cheap Quenched thirst lips pursed want first Wounds nursed Needs exchanged none complained mind unchained Your detained Souls merged pain purged lives converged Hope resurged Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Two words...Okay. But I like to have the last word...excellent! |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Wonderful LOne Wolf, Great two words! Loved this poem! netswan and, hey, you called me on icq, and I answered you, but you sit on my list of waiting for acceptance ?? |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
This was Great Lone!! WOW! hats off to You!!! |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Lone Wolf, I really liked this one, great job, enjoyed. Cerenity |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
Great Poem here, enjoyed reading |
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hsystems Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 319Murray, UT, USA |
Excellent, LoneWolf! You said a mouthful with those "two words."  Troy Beautiful, Thought-Provoking Poetry http://www.h-systems.net/p1.htm |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Those two words said it all. Now that's expression! Nice writing. A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
I love this! Ecxcellent work!! Not all those who wander are lost. ~J.R.R. Tolkien |
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Ella Junior Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 20 |
Wow, Lone wolf you have out done yourself here! This is EXCELLENT!!!!! I loved it. Every single last word of it. Two Words. Eloquently beautiful! Ella |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
serenity.....you got it!! The last word...thanks!! netswan....thank you. Happy you liked it. You are on my waiting list for ICQ too. Will try again, okay?? Romantic Heart....thanks, my friend. High compliment!!! Just came to me.  Cerenity_1....thank you!!! And Hi to you!!! daniel...thanks!!! Troy...that was my intent, my friend. Thank you, I try!!! (just for you!!)Danny....thanks. It is the little things that count as they say.... Eagle one...wow and I am happy to have touched so many people with this one. Ella....how am I gonna top that!!! LOL. Thank you very much for the kind words. Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
 This is excellent L.W.!!! You put alot of effort into this, I'm amazed by the flow and the feelings evoked. Thank you so much for sharing this!Hold me for yesterday Kiss me for tomorrow But love me for today. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
I like ! |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Butterflies....thank you and yes, I did. Sometimes you can an awful lot with just a few words. You are welcome for sharing!!! Marge....thanks!!!!! Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
~LW I stand amazed with the others. this was an awesome and inspirational piece of work. lovely job you have done here full of so much with those two words. excellent! amy ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Aimster....Thank you!!! Glad to inspire!! I was amazed at the responses I received on this one. Perhaps there are more where this came from!! Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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