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Bunny Junior Member
since 2000-05-13
Posts 30 |
I'm pressing the blade against my bruised heart I sit here, alone, crying the burning tears of my dark fate My eyes sting from all the hurt, all my fear I have been wounded and will not recover Your false hugs and words do not mske up for the searing pain that you created My life is laying before me, scattered and broken on the floor I cannot hear the smiles or hear the laughs, But I can feel the pain and taste the lies The next time you see me I will be free Free from this hurt that you created Will you even be sorry when you see what you did? What you ruined? Who you broke? Yes, it was you that broke ME..... |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
bunny... this is so very well said... "I cannot hear the smiles or hear the laughs, But I can feel the pain and taste the lies The next time you see me I will be free Free from this hurt that you created Will you even be sorry when you see what you did? What you ruined? Who you broke?" i don't know what to say but i FELT this poem well done! |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Oh Bunny, this poem is so impactful in each verse. A heart sometimes gets stabbed by such pain yet in time it heals and embraces love once again  Coco |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
I have to agree with everyone else, it was a powerful poem. I am sorry for your pain but you have the right idea "The next time you see me I will be free Free from this hurt that you created." a great poem, I especially loved the line "I'm pressing the blade against my bruised heart I sit here, alone, crying the burning tears of my dark fate" ------------------------ "Isn't it enough to see that a garden is beautiful without having to believe that there are fairies at the bottom of it too? " Douglas Adams. "Here chewing your tail is joy" Richey Edwards "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto |
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