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Precious Rose
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Precious Rose |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
O' precious Rose, I see thy face aglow, At eventide, when I in dream retire, Upon my soul, thy tenderness bestow, As touched upon, by depth of thy desire. Fair Rose, dear creature of my night's rejoice, When I upon thee gaze, mine heart doth quiver, In sweet anticipation of thy voice, A satin bloom, unto me deliver, Aglaea, sweet Grace of Splendor sent, As meadows washed in rain, untrodden snow, A joy unblemished, thy love transcendent, From forth thy lips, as honeyed mead doth flow. Thou art Calliope, goddess of night, Thy beauty fair, outshines the welkin light. [This message has been edited by Mike (edited 05-26-2000).] |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Enjoyed your poem very much!!!!!!  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Mike, the beauty of your words to rose is enough to make the moon blush. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Mikespeare! I mean Mike! This is perfect..lovely..beautiful..magical..perfect.. Did I tell you I like it?  |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
wow wow wow wow and yet again wow you are one kinda poetmaster, m'friend... damn! can you weave the words, or what? geez... i'm impressed |
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Rose Petal Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 52WVa. USA |
How many times am I in awe of you, how many words can express the emotion I feel from your poetry, A thousand words cannot compare thee, to the beauty, the love, felt from thy hand of romantic poetry!!!! |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
when I upon thee gaze mine heart doth quiver, so many beautiful words, Mike you are a true romantic, hope to read more of your poems. Nice to meet you. < !signature--> [This message has been edited by Rosebud1229 (edited 05-27-2000).] |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Stirring meditation, my friend... ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Vandana... thank you very much. Hope things are going well in India. Martie... and just what kind of moon are we talking about blushing here... OMG! sorry... hehe seriously, thank you for the gracious comment. Ms. deVine... been called a lot of things, first time for that...lol appreciate your comment. You are way too kind. Doreen... trying to make me blush are you.. er... I guess Martie did that. I am awaiting another of your rambles by the way. Rosebud and Rose Petal... now what is it about your names that I like so much. Thank you both ever so much for the wonderful comments. Claire... *smile* |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
How about "MikeMeister"????....  |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Your romanticism and style flow with such passion and grace Mike ... a truly wonderful verse! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Lily121 Junior Member
since 2000-05-23
Posts 24 |
Nice old english...can you teeach me it? |
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Lily121 Junior Member
since 2000-05-23
Posts 24 |
Nice old english...can you teach me it? |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
How funny, and kinda spooky! As I was reading this, I too, was thinking it sounded so Shakespeare, and then I nearly died when PdV said the same thing! hehehe Very cool! I do love your poems of love sir...they flow so beautifully! I'm glad to see you back posting btw...missed your verse to say the least! |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Nan... Mikemeister? is that some exotic kind of Kansas beer? Kit, a very gracious comment. Thank you. Lily... thank ya kindly... as far as Olde English... I speak English and I'm old... that is about as good I can do... *smile* glad you enjoyed. Femme... I am like a bad penny... keep turning up... better than throwing up I guess.. ack... anytways... thanks for the comment. |
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