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Life's Unrelenting Questions
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Life's Unrelenting Questions |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA 
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per request of Jeffrey Carter.... LIFE'S UNRELENTING QUESTIONS Life's unrelenting questions That recur as time's imposed Are really inconclusive. There's no answer predisposed There often aren't solutions To our quests as they are posed; They seem instead elusive Rather cryptic'ly reposed We dwell amidst confusions Often errors we've supposed We're frequently delusive With assumptions we've composed. Our life-long resolutions Never just as we've proposed - One thing that seems conclusive Is they're naught to be exposed...  [This message has been edited by Nan (edited 05-26-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Nan~ Wow, lady ! Words of wisdom go down easy this morning. Enjoyed the perspective immensely. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
"Oseds" used throughout! Wow! |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Does that mean we can't have our cake and eat it too......j/k.....hehehe  Now this is one that I could understand without an unabridged dictionary!! Which, by the way, I may be able to purchase today while I am in Center City (taking yet another test for a possible job). This is great, Nan!  Denise |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Great poem, Nan! Corinne |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
i had the feeling we'd never know the answers... or only know some of them anyway... but i'd like to at least know some of the questions *grin* enjoyed this... as always |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nan, Only as you could compose. Excellent. *L* |
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Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wonderfully rhythmic and flowing Nan ... I really enjoyed this! Best wishes, /Kit |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
hey quit exposing comrade tinkletutt! another fine one from nan folks in a canyon in a cavern excavatin for a mine dwelt a miner forty niner and his daughter clemintine!!! yeehaw! |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Thanks guys.... Jeffrey made me do it... Tinkletutt?????...  |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Nan~ Truly lovely! I like this philosophy, dear! I'm glad Jeffrey made you do it! Love Ya~ ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, and I am all the better for it~ Terry A. Woodson, Jr. |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Thanks muchly, Terry...  |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
enjoyed muchly my poetic Cape Coddite... er... Cape Coddian... er Cape Codder... Cape Codtonian... Cape Coddette... sheesh.. talk about unrelenting questions. wisdom does not become me early on a Saturday morning... but it was another superb poem from a superb poet. |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
Wow...the confusion of the poem kinda relates to the topic, true? Very nice however and truely of wisdom. Salma "Not all the answers lie within your realm or mine, they lie within the borders." |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
A fantastic poem, and well said, often we share for the answers without really knowing what the questions are. wonderful poem, each verse is a gem of wisdom. LIFE'S UNRELENTING QUESTIONS Life's unrelenting questions That recur as time's imposed Are really inconclusive. There's no answer predisposed There often aren't solutions To our quests as they are posed; They seem instead elusive Rather cryptic'ly reposed We dwell amidst confusions Often errors we've supposed We're frequently delusive With assumptions we've composed. Our life-long resolutions Never just as we've proposed - One thing that seems conclusive Is they're naught to be exposed... ------------------------ "Isn't it enough to see that a garden is beautiful without having to believe that there are fairies at the bottom of it too? " Douglas Adams. "Here chewing your tail is joy" Richey Edwards "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto "Do not listen to a word I say Just listen to what I can keep silent" Nicky Wire |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
WITHOUT question, this is excellent writing, Nan! Ponderously poetic, my friend! ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Wow!!! Nan, I must say this is a very powerful piece of writing. God , am I glad I asked....errr..."made" you do this All my love, Jeffrey I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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Colin Senior Member
since 1999-06-05
Posts 596Callington, Cornwall, England |
Good work Nan Nice rhyming scheme.and about the content... yup, as soon as you think you've got it sorted, along comes something else to bamboozle you! |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Nan, it was AWFUL! Awful beautiful that is! And I can see everyone else noticed it too. Awful truthful too! As usual, you're top of the line. jwesley |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
well Miss Nan, I really liked this poem, it was perfectyl written (as usual) and I can use it for an example as I attempt another rather painful rhyming poem. Wonderful my dear *hug* H |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Unquestionably well written, Nan |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Merci, mes amies....... |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
as someone who jumps to the wrong conclusion often, I really needed this!!!!! Kathleen [email protected] |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Yeh, Nan. You took the thoughts right out of my head. Only trouble is, I could never write them down the way you do. Lovely poem Liz |
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