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Such Love
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Such Love |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA 
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Such love Few have seen For when strong The rivers flowed And when weak You can hear it creak. Real love Is true I am Are you? No song Sings so well No tune so blue. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
loves got its peaks in valleys thaz why they say yuh fal in love hehehe o i kill me and your poem i do like it tells well |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Lovely, Spike. Enjoyed ~netswan |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Thank you wayoutwalt and netswan. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Simply put--but oh so strong---and what a presentation----tried to hold off and couldn't resist...much serene applause.... and much love to you as well.... |
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shilpi Member
since 2000-05-24
Posts 73 |
Thats true love alright !! wonderful work... shilpi |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
lovely, spiked! Corinne |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Beautifully said Spiked ... Best wishes, /Kit |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
lovely poem spiked. No song Sings so well No tune so blue. well when I start singing in tune, and acting without thinking like a fool I will now it is true love I have found, it is to bliss I will be bound. ------------------------ "Isn't it enough to see that a garden is beautiful without having to believe that there are fairies at the bottom of it too? " Douglas Adams. "Here chewing your tail is joy" Richey Edwards "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
Wow...beautiful poem that speaks of true love in only a few words. Very nice  Salma "Not all the answers lie within your realm or mine, they lie within the borders." |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
I loved it!!!!!!! |
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