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Open Poetry #7

If I were to die today!

bad girl
New Member

since 2000-05-19

Posts 6

0 posted 2000-05-25 03:39 PM

If I were to die
On this very day.
This is what
I would want to say.

I know it's hard,
But do not cry.
Now it's time
To say goodbye.

All the hurt, fear, and pain
That I have ever known,
Is gone from my life.
I am finally home.

So now my friend,
I have reached the end.
And now I will be your angel
Who never lets you dangle.

When you're lonely,
Think of me.
Right by your side
Is where I'll be.

So now you're there
And I am here.
But do not worry,
I am always near.

My body may be gone,
But my spirit has only grown.
And I will always be around
To let it be known.

So if I die
Before you do,
I'll go to Heaven
And wait for you!

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

1 posted 2000-05-26 02:50 PM

Hey,
I can't figure out, how this was never spotted, ...

This is a nice expressive piece of work, and keep it up...

Regards, sudhir

Life is like a painting,
That in an art gallery is left hanging,
Though many come just to look at it,
A very few actually come to enjoy it.

SpitFire
Member Elite

since 2000-04-19

Posts 2396

2 posted 2000-05-26 08:51 PM

~Bad Girl,...hehe (cool name). This is such a great piece...although I hope you're not going anywhere anytime soon

...but the thought of you saying you'd be waiting for whoever this poem was for is so sweet...so comforting in a way. *Take care.

doreen peri
Member Elite

since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

3 posted 2000-05-26 11:16 PM

hey, stick around a while... we'd like to read more of your poetry
*wink*

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