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Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

0 posted 2000-05-25 04:19 AM

Lead fills my heart
     dragging it down
                      to drown
and  I will
   for I began to drown
in your love....and now
             I see rock bottom
    coming closer

       I struggle for air
for strength to survive
          for with or without
      you,I may or may not
          but
            may's and might's
    just don't cut it

I am the decider
     of my happiness
  my sadness, my lonliness
          I will decide
   if I shall live
          or die
              so
        when I stop feeling
    I'll know I'm
        dead

Dark Angel
25/5/00


Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain."
I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow
(unkown)

wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

1 posted 2000-05-25 04:32 AM

i always keep my eyes tightly shut under water cuz im a sissy but its good to be able to see the rocks keep those eyes wide open! good poem

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

2 posted 2000-05-25 09:29 AM

I am sure that is a horrid place to feel yourself.

No one knows the future though.

Hugs hon - this is a good one.

K

Kit McCallum

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Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

3 posted 2000-05-25 09:36 AM

Never stop feeling Dark Angel, for you portray your emotions so well. You showed such power in the ending ... well done!

Best wishes,
/Kit

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

4 posted 2000-05-25 11:15 AM

How I like this...you've written my creed here...and I didn't find this so dark...
(you might wanna start worrying NOW--grin)
but well done, Dark Angel...

kat
Member

since 2000-05-20

Posts 387

5 posted 2000-05-25 11:27 AM

May's and might's don't cut it. You're right! but, at the sametime the futur is unknown. No matter what, never get to the point where you stop feeling. Great poem!

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

6 posted 2000-05-25 12:10 PM

Wonderful poem, Dark Angel. Sadness tempered with strength!

Denise

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

7 posted 2000-05-25 06:31 PM

Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain."
I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow
(unkown)

[This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 05-25-2000).]

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

8 posted 2000-05-25 06:31 PM

Walt, Soul-Sis, Kit,Serenity, Kat and Denise
Thank you so much for your kind and much appreciated replies. *HUGS* to you all.

Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain."
I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow
(unkown)

Martie

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

9 posted 2000-05-25 06:58 PM

Dark Angel--This is so strong and self determined, yet fragile and openly full of feeling...wonderfully done!

Balladeer

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

10 posted 2000-05-25 08:54 PM

Excellent writing, angel. May you never stop feeling.......

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

11 posted 2000-05-25 09:00 PM

Dark Angel,

What a strong poem. You are right...only you can make you happy or sad...no one else can decide that for you. Great words of wisdom.

LW

Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

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