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mitymopr
Junior Member
since 2000-05-24
Posts 14


0 posted 2000-05-25 01:54 AM


If we had never met
I would not be in pain
I'm the reason for all this rain
If we had never met
I would not hate
my life would be a clean slate
If we had never met
I would not know betrayal
love would not have failed
If we had never met
I would not know love
I would not know joy
nor would my spirits ever rise above
so in a twisted way
I must say
thank you for the pain you caused



 

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netswan
Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369
Washington
1 posted 2000-05-25 02:02 AM


Woeful sweet poem ---Mit
Writing is a great outlet for heartache,
and well you have done.

~netswan

Beverly
Member
since 2000-02-19
Posts 123
New Mexico
2 posted 2000-05-25 02:06 AM


I agree with Netswan "woefully sweet"!  I have been there, and what your are feeling is real pain.  May you find peace, and happiness again.  Thanks for posting!
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