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Cyndey
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since 2000-05-18
Posts 84
Arkansas

0 posted 2000-05-24 09:53 PM


"Confusion"

Confusion
A vice
Tightening around my soul
So dumbfounded I feel
On how to deal with you.
Is it my fear of being hurt?
Or are we just not meant to be?
I do not want to feel
Used, Cheapened, Degraded,
Or taken for Granted.
Why do I sense this is
All your able to give?
I want so much more
Than what I believe
You are capable of.

Should I mar my soul
By allowing you in?
Or
Should I lock the Door
And shut you out?



© Copyright 2000 Cyndey - All Rights Reserved
Holly
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since 2000-05-12
Posts 127
Arkansas
1 posted 2000-05-24 09:57 PM


Cyn-
OK GIRL, get out of my thoughts!!! LOL   Man, did you know what's running through my head about now or what??? I love this one...just creepy you are reading my mind again...haha.
love,
-Holly


 I know well what I am fleeing from but not what I am in search of.
Michel de Montaigne

netswan
Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369
Washington
2 posted 2000-05-24 10:04 PM


Cyndey,
NEVER settle for less in a relationship.
Is my answer to your sweet heartfelt poem.

~netswan

Cyndey
Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 84
Arkansas
3 posted 2000-05-24 10:05 PM


Well girl...
I guess that's what happens when We run around together as much as we do!  
Glad you got much out of it!
luv,
Cyn

Cyndey
Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 84
Arkansas
4 posted 2000-05-24 10:15 PM


thanks Netswan! advice well taken!  
Cyn

jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
5 posted 2000-05-24 10:34 PM


"..why do I feel this is all you're able to give"...my advice...run, now, like away.

Very nice piece. Gets right down to the meat and bones...and like NSwan said...if you're settling for less...kiss him goodbye as you boot him out the door. And that's male talk!

jwesley

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