Open Poetry #7 |
Confusion |
Cyndey Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 84Arkansas |
"Confusion" Confusion A vice Tightening around my soul So dumbfounded I feel On how to deal with you. Is it my fear of being hurt? Or are we just not meant to be? I do not want to feel Used, Cheapened, Degraded, Or taken for Granted. Why do I sense this is All your able to give? I want so much more Than what I believe You are capable of. Should I mar my soul By allowing you in? Or Should I lock the Door And shut you out? |
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Holly Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 127Arkansas |
Cyn- OK GIRL, get out of my thoughts!!! LOL Man, did you know what's running through my head about now or what??? I love this one...just creepy you are reading my mind again...haha. love, -Holly I know well what I am fleeing from but not what I am in search of. Michel de Montaigne |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Cyndey, NEVER settle for less in a relationship. Is my answer to your sweet heartfelt poem. ~netswan |
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Cyndey Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 84Arkansas |
Well girl... I guess that's what happens when We run around together as much as we do! Glad you got much out of it! luv, Cyn |
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Cyndey Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 84Arkansas |
thanks Netswan! advice well taken! Cyn |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
"..why do I feel this is all you're able to give"...my advice...run, now, like away. Very nice piece. Gets right down to the meat and bones...and like NSwan said...if you're settling for less...kiss him goodbye as you boot him out the door. And that's male talk! jwesley |
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