Open Poetry #7 |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Those days of love are gone, Those words of love are gone, Gone,all gone, But I still love you in my heart, My heart does love you, will love you, Till we go on and on, living like this forever, I'll love you, till the end of time, untill we get in time For the right time, Those days of love are gone Those days of words are gone, Gone,all gone, Here, watching the stars at night, thinking about the time, The time we had together, Spending all my life through, But I still remember, So deeply ,deeply in my heart, My heart I give it to you forever, Those days,I stilll remember, remembering you deeply, Inside my heart, One by one stars disappear, And take your heart away, forever,forever, Untill It's forever for us, To be close forever, forever,forever, Forever |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Beautiful Vandana...I have struggled with those feelings so much..after the days of love are gone and the words are gone the love lives on and lingers in the heart...and I hold on to it so tight and so dearly for I want to know love and experience love...yet it is gone...only some memories in my past...so I must finally let go and once more search for love. James |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Nicely done Vandana... enjoyed reading your poem. |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
Very Nicely Done ![]() |
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