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somebody kill me please
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somebody kill me please |
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mitymopr Junior Member
since 2000-05-24
Posts 14 |
This post has been edited, as its content was inappropriate for posting under our forum guidelines [This message has been edited by Nan (edited 05-24-2000).] |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I enj**ed this. Well, at least some part of me did.  I'm not going to use the cliche "Things get better"; that's probably the last thing you want to hear. But I will say, isn't it great that poetry can help you express what you can't say aloud except alone?Mike |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
now I'm getting paranoid--this sounded WAY too familiar... But I do approve...sometimes even hitting the asterisks make ya feel better... |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
sometimes it may be good to let it out but i just hit 1000 replies and i could get to member emeritus easily and no one would ever know i replied to this one a thousand times cuz methinks soon it'll be deleted yuh |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I know, Walt. And so does Serenity. You're OURS! And I think this poem's fine.Mike |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
but but it made me think words in my mind that horrified me why i never knew i knew these words and now i am randomly shouting them as i am naked and frothing but yuh the poem is well done but yuh know the rules |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
******************************************** Now that I feel better---the point, I think, is not what we think--but that we think... and this, is rage and hurt and pain expressed, no, not beautifully, but just the way it is.....thank you... ******************************************** |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
forgot to add---GREAT TITLE |
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