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Love Affair |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
Love Affair Darkest of nights Whirling thoughts of confusion No answers in sight Only fantasy and illusion A bounty of dreams Their need to be real Hopes at times shattered For a heart’s need to feel Patiently waiting Life’s unforeseen events Hanging in limbo In hopes of catching a glimpse Cold yet warm In an unpredictable storm Caught in a spiral Destinations unknown Never forgetting Moments of bliss Forever hopeful For not one to miss Timeless engagements Of moments of passion Secretive and wondrous Approached with caution Protecting the heart Yet leaving it exposed Where everything is open And no doors are closed Committed to one In love with another A lover that is willing It gets harder and harder |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Ohh Kat, this is really good what emotions you have expressed here. "Caught in a spiral destinations unknown" a captivating verse CocoBaci |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
its true it does get harder.... but here is a smile and a welcome to passions greeting |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
with wayoutwaltwelcoming with a wave... you must be a good'n.... Welcome to Passions - Check your email for a special greeting....  |
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MysticalNights Member
since 2000-05-17
Posts 112Oklahoma |
Kat, great piece..I can imagine your confusion in awkward times such as these. " Committed to one In love with another A lover that is willing It gets harder and harder" That hurts...... |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Nice work, kat Lets see more of your work soon.... WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!! Regards, sudhir Life is like a painting, That in an art gallery is left hanging, Though many come just to look at it, A very few actually come to enjoy it. |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
It's really not fair is it. To be allowed to fall for one who's already spoken for. This is very well expressed Kat, And welcome to Passions.  ~Sheri |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Welcome to Passions, Kat - What a beautiful poem to start out with for your grand entrance -- Ah, at the mysteries of love. ~netswan |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
welcome, very nice writing, love...sigh... you hit it perfectly |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
"committed to one, in love with another,a lover that's willing, it get's harder and harder" Yeah, man...if that doesn't sound like some of my beer drinking red-neck friends, there'll never be a description of them. Loved the piece...welcome to passions... jwesley |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
welcome to passions, a great poem. powerful emotional exploration, Cold yet warm In an unpredictable storm Caught in a spiral Destinations unknown Never forgetting Moments of bliss Forever hopeful For not one to miss Timeless engagements Of moments of passion Secretive and wondrous Approached with caution Protecting the heart Yet leaving it exposed Where everything is open And no doors are closed Committed to one In love with another A lover that is willing It gets harder and harder ------------------------ "Isn't it enough to see that a garden is beautiful without having to believe that there are fairies at the bottom of it too? " Douglas Adams. "Here chewing your tail is joy" Richey Edwards "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Committed to one In love with another A lover that is willing It gets harder and harder hmmmm I know just how you feel...Great poem! Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain." I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow (unkown) |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kat~ Welcome to Passion's. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
Thanks to everyone for all your beautiful words. I'm really new at this and I wasn't sure if I was going to post this poem because it's very personal to me, but something compelled me to do so. You've made me feel very welcome. Thank-you  |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Ah..a lovely entrance. Welcome to the family...  |
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Angel`Fox Junior Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 32Ottawa, Ontario Canada |
Very nice,... @}>*+~^ Angel`Fox ^~+*<{@ {~._.~} _( Y )_ ()~*~() (_)-(_) "Love seeketh not itself to please Nor for itself hath any care, But for another gives its ease, And builds a heaven in hell's despair" |
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