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svtcobra
Junior Member
since 2000-05-23
Posts 14
Syracuse,NY USA
0 posted 2000-05-24 02:16 AM

Classic beauty
long hair
mysterious eyes
sensious lips

skin deep?
NO wish it was
make it easy
physical attraction


Deeper still
I will get hurt
worth it
i Don't know


Leave him
thats the answer
figure it out
i am here

reality check
five years in
got no chance
move on now
© Copyright 2000 David J. Gassen - All Rights Reserved
mitymopr
Junior Member
since 2000-05-24
Posts 14
1 posted 2000-05-24 02:24 AM

Dude this is all good stuff, that you should be sending to her

 
Crystal Lynn
Junior Member
since 2000-05-21
Posts 18
Miami, FL. USA
2 posted 2000-05-24 02:24 PM

yea i agree..have you sent these to her..maybe she doesnt know how deep ur feelings are...but shed get an idea from these poems...great work take care..

crystal
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