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epoet Member
since 2000-05-11
Posts 291grand rapid,MI, usa 
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Time ticking away ever so slowly. I feel stuck in a constant time warp. Watching others hurry by, while I wait patiently. Time going so soon makes me wonder what tommorrow may bring. Hoping anxiously, wandering aimlessly, just waiting for time....... P. J. Kotrch |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Time is funny, isn't it? Sometimes it drags, sometimes it zips right on by! Good poem! Denise |
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epoet Member
since 2000-05-11
Posts 291grand rapid,MI, usa |
yes indeed time is funny. thanks for reading my poem. P. J. Kotrch carpe diem A soul once touched is a soul once blessed by love |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
Ya know, we invented time and gave it it's parameters, and interestingly enough, it now controls us. We wait for it when ther's too much of it and we hold on to it when it speeds by so fast. i like the concept here. Everyone is hurrying to catch their time, while you simply wait for yours. i dig it. We all got somethin' we need to atone for. |
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epoet Member
since 2000-05-11
Posts 291grand rapid,MI, usa |
thanks you are so right. time rules so many people and yet we don't stop to take any for ourselves. P. J. Kotrch carpe diem A soul once touched is a soul once blessed by love |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
epoet this is a refreshing poem. Light easy, and I can see you patiently waiting for time to pass as those others walk by you. Time is a very interesting subject. ~netswan |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Time is indeed an interesting subject, if you watch it too long you may have too little of it left. God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
EPoet~ Time marches on until the magic of the moment commands HALT ... then time stands still ... for as long as the need be. Enjoyed your poetic thoughts. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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epoet Member
since 2000-05-11
Posts 291grand rapid,MI, usa |
thank you one and all for your comments. I appreciate it, I really like being here. What amazes me is that time is never time enough. P. J. Kotrch carpe diem A soul once touched is a soul once blessed by love |
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