realizing reality kinda sucks

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Open Poetry #7

realizing reality kinda sucks

Crystal Lynn
Junior Member

since 2000-05-21

Posts 18
Miami, FL. USA

0 posted 2000-05-23 07:47 PM

now its clear
youve made ur choice
but im still here
waiting for your voice
i cry uncontrollably
knowing it wont do anything
but something in my heart
wont let me move on
i love you
thats all i want to hear
why is it so hard
for you to say those words to me
but i guess it is
at least for you to say them to me
youve said them to her
and it hurts to know the truth
i hate you
for making me feel this way
ive never felt this desire
this longing so strong
and yet get nothing in return
whats wrong with me
am i that undesirable to you
others try to take ur place
but it doesnt work
my heart wont let them
when will this end
i alone know the answer
and this will all make sense to me
cuz in the future ill see
that him and i
we were never meant to be

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2000-05-23 07:56 PM

Exactly..I enjoyed reading. James

Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

2 posted 2000-05-24 08:55 AM

Hi Crystal,

This is a touching poem and one you show much feeling in, time is not what you want to hear as the answer but it looks like it is and seems you know that by your poem, and sharing your feelings here can pass much time, so I look forward to more of your work.

WELCOME TO PASSIONS

Love, Cerenity

Poet deVine

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3 posted 2000-05-24 09:48 AM

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Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

4 posted 2000-05-24 01:48 PM

Thoughtful piece of writing, Crystal Lynn

WELCOME TO PASSIONS !!!

Regards, sudhir

Life is like a painting,
That in an art gallery is left hanging,
Though many come just to look at it,
A very few actually come to enjoy it.

ESP
Member Elite

since 2000-01-25

Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....

5 posted 2000-05-24 01:56 PM

Welcome to Passions, Crystal Lynn!! This is a great first post!!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie

"Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

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