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SusieQue
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since 2000-05-22
Posts 6
East Texas

0 posted 2000-05-23 01:51 PM


Maybe Tommorow
Just as the sun breaks into day
With the promise of new beginings
Maybe then you will not turn away.

Maybe after Heartache
Sobbing tears I cry
You can come to me
And kiss those tears dry.

Maybe on a winters night
cold dark winds blow
we will snuggle in close
and let our loving flow.

Maybe when my Heart is Smiling
Laughter bubbling out
Sweet Joy & Happiness
You will join me without doubt.

Maybe in the Summer Time
On a beautiful sunshine day
As I sit and watch the children
You will bring your heart to stay.

Maybe when I am Old
My hairs all white and grayed
You will take my hand in yours
and feel this is of what we prayed.

Maybe durring a Lovers Dance
In our mind this song does play
Our bodies pressed together, slow & gentle sway
Maybe then in my arms you will stay.

Maybe on a Mountain Top
Cool and crisp the air I breathe
Worries cast upon the winds
You will come to me, but this time never leave.

Maybe as I dream this night
Of yet better nights and days
You will lay beside me and whisper in my ear
That this is how you want it always.

© Copyright 2000 Susie Coplen - All Rights Reserved
ESP
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
1 posted 2000-05-23 02:40 PM


This is really really beautiful, Susieque. A lovely piece of poetry.

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

Lucius Cade
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since 2000-03-23
Posts 235
Saskatchewan
2 posted 2000-05-23 02:50 PM


I can relate to this poem very well. Well writen I loved it.

 Lucidity is the answer to all problems

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2000-05-23 06:18 PM


I once had a person that I wanted to come back to me and in the beginning it was my urgents hearts desire...after some time passed it became a sorrowful heartbreak and today I have lost all hope and desire.  James
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