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There is a cloud |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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Oh how I ache for the sunshine, Oh how I need her warmth to bathe in her glory and her kiss on my skin her brightness surrounds me and I feel my aura glow like the tulips and poppies I feel myself grow but there is a cloud and he moves slowly toward her hovering, daring to intercept her light he is carried by the wind… will he cast a shadow? a dark shaped coldness or will I revel continuously in my sun? Dark Angel 23/5/00 < !signature--> Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain." I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow (unkown) [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 05-23-2000).] |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Excellent Dark Angel ... I really enjoyed the powerful comparison you've used here ... it gave me a little chill as I read! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DarkAngel~ Well, I'm no meteorologist, but I predict fair skies in your future - with LOTS of sunshine. I enjoyed the thoughts and the formatting in this one. Nicely done. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Wow Maree...amazing. This just aches this does. I imagine you will indeed continue to revel...  K |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Woohoo! I'm all for sunshine girl! (but hey, not too many of those poppies ok?)  LOLIf the wind keeps blowing then the clouds keep moving, and it won't cover the sun for long! Excellent work! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Kit a chill hey?, brrrrr blame it on the cloud heheh. seriously thank you so much. Marge honey, thank you so much I wish the same for you. Soul-Sis I beleive I will do so Thanks honAngel, yeah well I like those Poppies! Awwww not fair! Thanks honJe t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain." I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow (unkown) |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
poppies good sun poisoning bad poem good poppies bad |
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