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My Turn |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa 
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My sun is setting, The time has come, For me to take another stride. With conscience letting, And feelings numb, I sit back to enjoy the ride. I Wont remain, Without a light, My aspirations brightly burn. And though some pain, May be in sight, It cant keep me, from my turn. |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Kevin,...I believe this is the first of you I've read, and I like, I like. ~Lots~  I'm glad that you won't let it keep you from your turn. *This is a great post. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Kevin so glad to see your posting again. i have missed reading your work. this is an excellent poem. you amaze me with your talent. love this piece and its uplifting theme. take care, amy "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." |
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WhiteNite Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 241Montgomery, AL |
Cool poem. Quite inspirational. =) Thanks. --Dave "Don't let your character get camoflaged with your environment. Find who you are and let it stay in its true colors." --Rachel Joy Scott |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Kevin, I enjoyed the symbolism here...Heavenly, dear poet... ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Kevin, glad to see you back now and again. This is pure Kevin.... there are so many new poets here you should post some of your old ones, Id like to see some of them again and I'm sure so would they. Parker |
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