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It's Beautiful Outside |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
It's Beautiful Outside Outdoors framed by squeaky clean window like a painted picture, green thick grass red roses, pink carnations beckoning temptation to leave this computer Plush Maple tree shading country road the fence showing where the grass was mowed buttercups, humming birds, busy bees seductive in their sheer purity Working on the net, window peeking standing to open the window to get a whiff freshness, fills the indoor stagnant air back to the computer, isn't fair Daylight will soon be gone oh, to feel the earth on bare toes time to get out where the garden grows 'tis too inviting, it's a siren song Cannot ignore the beautiful skies stretching legs and digging in the dirt 'tis time to touch the gentle wind Good-bye computer, you lose again ~netswan Teresa King www.tipsfortop.com |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Awesome!!! This is superb,....it IS too tempting 'eh? It's just what's right out there,...and glad to see it's what you chose. Mmmm,...your descriptions were tasty,...makes me want to come to where you are  . |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is beautiful, Teresa! Can you send that lovely weather my way?!  Denise |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
SpitFire what a wonderful comment - made my day! Denise -- NOPE am not sharing this gorgeous weather, have waited too long to get it. LOL Thanks for taking the time to compliment this poem --) You are such a sweetheart. |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Sounds like you're sitting here at my house looking out the window! It's just wonderful isn't it! I too have had to leave the computer behind to play out side the last couple of weeks!  This is great netswan! |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Wise choice to leave the computer and enjoy the weather, we have had a mixture of rain and sun today so one minute you are soaking up sun the next you are running for shelther. I love Irish summers. A great poem, think you might be able to e-mail me so nice American sun, just to borrow for a week or two. < !signature-->------------------------ "Isn't it enough to see that a garden is beautiful without having to believe that there are fairies at the bottom of it too? " Douglas Adams. Small Black Flowers That Grow In The Sky "You have your very own number They dress your cage in its nature Once you roared now you just grunt lame Pace around pathetic pound games Wanna get out won't miss you sensaround To carry your own dead to swing your tyre tricks Wanna get out here you're bred dead quick For the outside, The small black flowers that grow in the sky They drag sticks along your walls Harvest your ovaries dead mothers crawl Here comes warden, Christ, temple, elder Environment not yours you see through it all Wanna get out won't miss you sensaround To carry your own dead to swing your tyre tricks Wanna get out here you're bred dead quick For the outside, The small black flowers that grow in the sky Here chewing your tail is joy" Richey Edwards [This message has been edited by brian madden (edited 05-24-2000).] |
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