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Lorraine Nisbet
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0 posted 2000-05-22 06:34 PM




It's time to move on
you've been idle too long
today is a good day
you have to be strong.
You will make a new friend
with whom to enjoy the days
to bring back the laughter
and help get through the maze.
Like a team
we will work together
to comfort and support
be there for one another.
So get on with the new
it will feel strange
but in the end
we all have to change.

~Lorraine~
      

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1 posted 2000-05-22 06:38 PM


This reminds me of gettting over someone and moving on. Nice work.

 We are all poets, its just some people dont know it yet.

Poet deVine
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2 posted 2000-05-22 07:48 PM


Or starting a new job....
Lorraine Nisbet
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3 posted 2000-05-23 07:43 PM



Maria,
And you would be right.
Thank you.

~Lorraine

Lorraine Nisbet
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4 posted 2000-05-23 07:52 PM



To Poet deVine,
Are we talking about my job or yours?  hehe  In fact you just reminded me, I wrote a poem about my job.  I think I'll go post it.  Thank you.
~Lorraine

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5 posted 2000-05-23 10:17 PM


I relate to this as getting over an old love.
Fits my situation as if I had written it myself.
Wonderfully written.
Hope you find the strenth to move forward.
Thanks
Rich

Lorraine Nisbet
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6 posted 2000-05-23 10:55 PM



Hi, Rich!

Wish you had written it...lol...forward and onward we go.  Thank you.

~Lorraine

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7 posted 2000-05-24 01:23 AM


Perhaps not so much the times that change as people that change over time. Either way you are right, we have to move on.

 God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown



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8 posted 2000-05-24 01:29 AM


Lorraine~
Time changes ...
man/woman re-arranges.

Moving on is sometimes necessary
to get over/under/around/beyond.
Mostly beyond .....  

Lovely decisive thoughts you've penned.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Lorraine Nisbet
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9 posted 2000-05-24 11:01 AM



Hi, EagleOne
Hi, Marge

Moving on has been great.  Meeting new people here at Passionate has been inspirational.
Thank you both.

~Lorraine

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