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Jon Mewett
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0 posted 2000-05-22 06:55 AM


Come with me where souls reside
Where tears are shed and feelings hide
Where fairies dance and goblins laugh
Come on down this starry path
Where peace now sits on golden sand
Come with me to passion land

The silence here just brims with love
The electric words come from above
Dressed in joy and long sweet sighs
Magic forms before your eyes
Words of hope sprawl from your hand
When you’re with me in passion land

Come and hear the hawks’ shrill cry
Where black cats live and dragons fly
Where smiling faces wink at you
The clouds are white the sky is Blue
Come and view the harbour grand
Atop the hill in passion land

See how laughter rends the air
When sparkling verses gather there
You can pour out sorrow and welcome hope
And if you’re on that slippery slope
Come where some kindreds' understand
Come with me to...... passion land


Jon Mewett


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Denise
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1 posted 2000-05-22 11:13 AM


You've described this place well, Jon!  

Denise

...here are some more 'faces' at Passions:

                    

Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
2 posted 2000-05-22 02:09 PM


I like this very much!!! There is a welcome sign at the edges of Passion Land...glad you came to join us...  
MagnoliaBlue
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3 posted 2000-05-23 12:33 PM


Jon...
This is done so well. I really like it.
Thanks for the great read!

MBlue

 

netswan
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since 2000-03-28
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4 posted 2000-05-23 12:36 PM


Jon, I am here -- got your hand - lookin'
'round passion land!

Lovely, homage to this dear place --)

Well written Poem, Jon

~netswan

[This message has been edited by netswan (edited 05-23-2000).]

Jon Mewett
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5 posted 2000-05-23 03:23 AM


Thanx everybody your most kind.

Jon

Nan
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6 posted 2000-05-23 06:54 AM


Very nice tribute - to a very special place - Tis our cyber home, indeed...  ...
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