Open Poetry #7 |
Life Is Like Boxing - written with netswan (boxing likened to life was her idea hmm) |
Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Life is Like Boxing Sometimes life is like boxing match until you die from when you were hatched sometimes the rules are basically the same 'cause win or lose, it's just a game Sometimes life will knock you down when you know you have to face another round sometimes life gives you a second chance when you look at it from a boxer's stance Sometimes you never know what your opponent will bring when the lights dim, you hear the bell ring sometimes life gives you a standing eight count where you get time to shake the cobwebs out Sometimes you are in the ring after losing the bout you brush yourself off but still have doubts sometimes life works out that way and you challenge it again on another day Sometimes you are overwhelmed by your opponents' size But you push on with the joy that you're still alive sometimes you feel like you are standing alone and forget about the loved ones that cheer you on Sometimes you have to prance and dance while you choose life's path and take a chance sometimes you end up on the losing side but no matter what, you must stand with pride Sometimes we look back, the bout has been won life almost over, the race has been run sometimes our destiny has us on the edge of our seats life is like a boxing match with its wins and defeats Jeffrey Carter and Teresa King (netswan) All my love, Jeffrey I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
very good idea a boxin match and life yuh i get tko'd all the time.. nice poem |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Hey, Jeffrey, you posted it! What fun. Thanks, Wayout --) netswan |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Life is like a boxing match... so that would explain my aching body and the head ache, funny the way it only feels like that after a night of drinking. really liked this, lots of truths but written in a playful way. great poem. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Jeffrey and Teresa, Great to one by two of my favorite poets!! I love the theme and can realte as you know!!You two write very well together. LW |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Thank you netswan for allowing me the oppurtunity to write with you. I enjoyed it much. Sorry to say this may be the last time I post anything for a while , my comp is down. (posting from a friends house now so...) Do no fret, I shall return soon All my love, Jeffrey I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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