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The earth is crying
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The earth is crying |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
The wind is blowing and dark clouds is showing. Like an angry beast, the sky growls with more fierceness than a wolf's growl. Lightning is streaking across the skies, with such a passion that belies. The earth must be mad at someone because she has brought out dark clouds and covered up the sun. Her heart must be filled with grief and pain because, the dark clouds, is fixing to release the rain. My heart goes out to mother earth because I love her and I came from her dirt. I hate to see her like this because, my heart is filled with heavy bliss. The wind velocity has increased as the clouds look more like sheets. The lightning has extended to the ground and the thunder has reached deafning sounds. Finally, the rain is pouring from the skies as all the pain and frustrations is pouring from her eyes. All of her emotions are pouring down on me, causing me to feel more downbeat. Man, I feel like dying and I'm not lying because mother earth, is deeply hurt, and she's crying. Nathan |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Nate~ I like this piece. Very strong emotions to go right along with the strong weather conditions you're describing. As badly as we need the rain here in Florida, I sure don't want the wrath of the storms to come with it. Perhaps she's vented and when she comes to call she'll remember to 'mind her manners.' No temper tantrums needed. Great piece of writing by you, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Oh my goodness,....the imagery is incredible. This poem is marvelous,..truly,..I love this earth and the emotions from this poem have hit me hard. You've done a wonderful job. Thanks for sharing. *Peace. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
You've described perfectly the kind of weather we have been having here this past week. Pretty wicked at times. Nice to see you again, Nate!  Denise |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"The earth must be mad at someone..cause she's brought out dark clouds...and covered up the sun." Very nice Nate...sometimes it does seems this way...the changes in the weather do affect our moods. James |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Thank you Marge, I agree with everything you say and thanks for the good post. Thank you Spitfire for the incredible, that's the first time a poem of mine has been called that. Thank you Denise for your nice comments. Thank you James for your nice comments. Nathan |
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